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    [WIP/Draft/CW: Fanfic]Harry Potter Fanfiction Help Needed!

    in Creative Works

    Posted

    Um. Yes. Um. Hmmm.

    The first thing I'm going to note is that this story does not need to be in the HP universe at all. You're not using any of the systems elucidated in the reference work in your plot, nor do any of the plot elements seem particularly relevant to your intended plotline.

    The second thing I'm going to note is the insane amount of trainwreck potential. You introduce this new "Mother Magic" character, what are her motivations? What is she? How and why does she exist? How does her existence tie into the general scheme of things? What is the "Conflux Realm"? How/Why does it exist? Was it artificially created? What are the political relationships between this realm and "everywhere else"? The mother of your OC basically overdoses the father with enough love potion to force him to fall in love, then to father a child, but he still has enough self-awareness to kill her to avoid social stigma? How and why does your OC look exactly like Harry? Genetically speaking, that's almost infinitely improbable. And you classify "dark magic" as magic that is driven by instinct, but the source material clearly identifies the Cruciatus Curse as a Dark Magic, which requires imagination and concentration, along with the measured intent of inflicting pain, to be effective.

    Furthermore, you're fundamentally ignoring the source material's conceptualisation of magic. You're creating a system where magic flows independently and in accordance to personality and mindset, where focusing on studying a subset of magic causes a person's aptitude for magic to favor that branch of magic. However, in the source material, you can see through the study methods and practices at all the magical academies that specialisation in a branch of magic does not enhance your innate proficiency for that branch, just like how specialising in say, neurology, does not enhance your inherent proficiency in terms of the workings of the brain. It adds on to your learned proficiencies, and there is no logical basis to suggest that learned proficiencies can be inherited.

    Simply put, you create a metric ton of questions and holes, and if those aren't properly filled in by the conclusion of the story, the fic is going to fall apart faster than a decade-old rickshaw with rotting wood and missing screws in a hurricane.

    Lets Start with Mother Magic.

    She is the sentient being that gave magic to any magical creature. For she, it can also be a he or non binary, doesn't really matter, I just like the flow of Mother Magic. Which she sorta acts like that to her children. Her Beginning? Who knows. Her Origin will be unknown. Her existence is just like any 'God' Not reallyto be worshiped, but to devote something to her, since she is the reason you have magic.

    The Conflux realm is just that. A realm formed by Confluence. Were high magical concentrations merge together, but how it was built, I do not know yet. I was going to add that in to the story. Its purpose is to separate the Non Magicals from the Magicals, without fear of discovery.

    Love potions do not work work forever! The Father was a away on his duties that the effect wore off. And i havent described how he looks yet anywhere... HE will not look like Harry, they were foolish as children to merge blood together to be like "Blood Brothers" as they were together in the orphanage.

    Now for the magic part. This is a fanfiction and I am basing and what magic should be from my perspective.

    Dark magic which is coined by magicals to create a divide on what is good and evil.

    The instinctual and raw emotions behind the casting of "dark" magic is why the "Light" is afraid of it. The British Ministry bans anything they do not like. So the thought of what is and isn't is light or dark is minute. But with stronger emotions fueled, the stronger the "dark"magic will become, while "Light magic has very use for emotion, since the spells are based of intent, their own magic and what they can think of. To me, all magic is what you can think of.

    Again this is MY fanfiction. My source of how magic is formed is through my mindset.

    Lets start at the beginning. a Muggleborn Wizard has "new" magic, unrefined and free to do what its user will do with it. There is no "limit" on what they can do. As they practice their own magic, in different branches, their magic becomes attuned to that specific type of magic. SO lets say That muggleborn breeds with another muggleborn. They both loved transfiguration and the dark arts and studied those magics heavily. Their children, since their parents magic was use to those magic, it was transferred to the child. So, that child's magic takes liking to the dark arts and transfiguration. So with attuned magic towards those, it is easier for him/her/it to cast. But what about the branches they ignored? well their magic is not use to those branches so the magic has no starting inclination to be proficient in them. But with hard work their magic can be attuned to it.

    [WIP/Draft/CW: Fanfic]Harry Potter Fanfiction Help Needed!

    in Creative Works

    Posted · Edited by elfen

    Hello y'all I am elfen. And i am a fanfiction addict v.v Yes, I admit it....

    But to the point! I have read plenty of Dark Harry fanfictions, that I want to try my hand in one!

    Here is a brief plotline

    -There is Harry Potter and his Twin Benjamin Potter. The fiasco with LV still happens and the Potter parents die. But Mother Magic(She is a sentient being who bestows magic to living creatures, etc) transports him to an orphanage, but somewhere in Russia, Rowan Ivanovich Raskonikolv, a baby that was born April three months before Harry, well Rowans mother is a squib, and she was able to get a strong love potion from a fae from the Conflux Realm(Pretty much were other magical creatures, an a few wizards reside that isn't in the plane of mortals) and she constantly gave it to her Husband, Ivan Nicoliavich Raskonikolv, who is a well respected, Curse Breaker, as well as Wardist in Russia. But wizards in Russia do not really accept squibs or non magical beings. Usually the end up dead or abandoned. But the mother, for a trade, got a continuous amount of love potion(I need a name) as well as a potion that is able to reflect ANY spell back to the caster, but the spell still affects the victim. Father uses killing curse, she drinks potion, and the father dies as well. Mother magic transports Rowan to the same orphanage as Harry, they become blood bonded "brothers"

    But pretty much it will be a Dark Harry and some bashing in it. I plan on having them be proficient Necromancers, but each having their own faults and disadvantage in other branches of magic, and not be a prodigy in them all.

    Harry- Necromancy, Soul Magic/Blood Magic, Ritualism, Charms, Wandless Magic, Dark arts

    He would suck at - Transfiguration, potions, and herbology

    Rowan- Necromancy, Mind magic, Transfiguration, Ritualism, Wandless, Dark arts,Warding

    Sucks at- Alchemy, Herbology,

    And above average on anything else.

    And my theory on magic is something like this.

    The "pure" blooded wizards, their magic is more refined. With the mixing of other magic with other families, refines and sharpens certain aspects of magic as it passes on(mother magic kinda also gives random gifts, that can be passed down... you will see that with Hermoine) So the reason why they think they are more powerful is because their magic is more tame and controlled while muggle borns magic are wild and unrefined. But with this untamed magic, the witch or wizard can be proficient in ANYTHING they set their eyes on. Such as Hermoine devoting her time on Runes, Transfiguration and Potions will alter her magic in tune with what she does most. This could end up, if she mates with another magical, for her child to be proficient in those areas as well, but still a little out of control, but more refined.

    For the Dark and Light Matter...it doesn't mean "bad vs good" It is just how magic is handled.

    Dark magic is more primal and instinctual magic that relies on emotions, clarity of mind and intent, while Light magic is more of a free form that is based on intent, imagination and less relied on emotions. I will explain more on that if you want....

    If anyone wants to help me construct my chapters, I would love the help, bouncing ideas, editing and writing bits and pieces you name it. I will post them on my ffnet account and archive of our own account once i reach at least 60k words before i post any chapters....

    My Mono-run. Poison

    in Team Showcase

    Posted

    Well I started off with a male named Rowan.... I started off with Bulbasaur..

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    Relaxed

    30/11/31/29/25/2

    Beat Cain easily, only taking 5 damage out of 21. tackle tackle tackle

    Beat Victoria with no taken damage.

    I quickly caught a decent intimidate ekans and leveled it on par to my bulbasaur.

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    Well, I caught a Trubish for toxic spikes.

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    I got the espuur for covet, and a noivern for frisk. I am going to get a compound user to get me some black sludge.

    This is where i started. Hope it all goes well

    PS ....Will it count for a double post if i just post and post my updates...

    Poison mono run help

    in Team Showcase

    Posted

    Yes... I am going to be just like cain....dear god help me get through this.

    Here are the pokemon I have in mind, but i cannot think of the others. And be cautious, i am not going back to any episodes, only in 14.

    Starter- Bulbasaur

    Venusaur

    Ability- Either one.

    EV- Prob Sp attk. and def

    Item- Big Root

    Moves-

    Sleep powder Leech Seed

    Growth Giga Drain

    Venomoth

    Tinted Lens

    HP and DEF

    Idk

    Quiver Dance Bug Buzz

    Psychic ????

    Crobat

    Infiltrator

    Speed and ATK

    idk

    Acrobatics Confuse Ray

    Cross Poison ????

    Dragalge

    Adaptability

    HP and SP ATK

    idk

    Surf Toxic

    Dragon Pulse Sludge Bomb

    Now I cannot form the last 2 members.... I also want 2 or 3 rotating members as well, any thought?

    [Spoilers!] Terror of Techno

    in Reborn City

    Posted

    gHuh, I know this sounds really bad, but I was having a hard time with Quagsire to Garchomp(Nidoking was first, then quag, then chomp, then drill, then dol, then hippo.) I seat up one toxic spikes with my Drapion, I beat Nidoking with Krookodile with EQ....Switched to my level 59 Gourgeighst, leech seeded, got hit by blizzard, but survived, used sub, uses blizzard, sub dies, uses Confuse ray, quag gets hurt. I use Phantom force, uses blizzard. I used a ultra potion to with stand the last blizzard, Luckily I was at full health. Garchomp comes, I use Leech seed, he uses buldoze, I use sub, then CR then PH then spam potions to survive. But it died shortly after chomp. The rest i used surf from my Greninja.

    Sleepy dude in Lapis Ward

    in Reborn City

    Posted

    I do not know if this was mentioned.

    But, in Lapis Ward, there is this Dude and his Wife in a complex/house near the entrance. The guy is fallen asleep. Is this due to the PULSE machine as in agate City, or something like DArkrai...

    The Lady mentions a cure but it is illegal... what could it be?

    Prepping for Ep 14.

    in Team Showcase

    Posted

    Okay, here are my team members...

    Greninja

    Lv 74

    Modest

    Protean

    252 sp atk/252 speed with 31/23/8/9/1/21

    Surf Lick

    Extrasensory dark pulse

    Houndoom

    Lv 75

    Timid

    Unnerve

    252 sp attk/252 speedwith 22/1/21/18/7/18

    Nasty plot dark pulse

    Flamethrower strength(gonna get hidden power here later.)

    Alakazam

    Lv 55

    Inner Focus

    Brave(going to change it to timid later.)

    252 sp attk/252 speed with 5/24/18/14/3/21

    Calm Mind Recover

    Shadowball Psychic

    Florges

    Lv 44

    Symbiosis

    lax(change to calm later)

    252 sp attk/252 sp def with 5/17/4/22/25/24

    Moonblast Misty terrain

    wish Magical leaf

    Flygon

    Lv 55

    Levitate

    Jolly

    252 speed/ 252 attack with 18/27/20/23/29/27

    Rock Slide Dig

    Earthquake Crunch

    Gourgeist

    Lv 55

    Careful

    Frisk

    252 def/ 252 sp def with 20/23/26/3/23/26

    Phantom Force Leech Seed

    Substitute Confuse ray

    Krookodile

    lv 75

    Moxie

    Jolly

    252 attack/252 speed with 3/24/24/16/22/12

    Earthquake crunch

    foul play outrage

    Drapion Carries a scope lens

    lv 73

    Sniper

    Impish

    252 attack/252 defense with 21/18/16/27/3/1

    Night Slash cross poison

    toxic spikes Hone claws

    Bisharp(its shiny...)

    lv 53

    Naive(change it to adamant )

    Defiant

    252 attack/252 def with 27/20/28/2/13/10

    Right now it has

    Assurance Iron head Night slash iron defense

    Should i have...

    Sword dance iron head night slash ????

    Leafeon

    lv 50

    lax

    Chlorophyll

    252 attack/ 252 def with 3/28/26/19/19/20

    Grasswhistle Sythesis Swords DAnce Leafblade

    Ninetales

    Lv 60

    Bold

    Drought

    252 sp def/252 speed with 28/29/23/8/26/19

    Nasty plot/ Will o wisp/ Flamethrower/ extrasensory

    Magnezone

    Lv 38

    Sturdy

    Naive

    ????/???? with 24/12/21/27/24/22

    I need help with this moveset

    Others worth mentioning.....in box....

    Kabutops

    Blissey

    Loudred

    Cyndiquill

    Lickitung

    trevent

    Castform

    Victorybell

    Pyroar

    Meowstic

    Drifloon

    Sooo what should my main team be???

    You guessed it,Charlotte Help!!

    in Reborn City

    Posted

    Hmm well the first two pokemon need to be Grinded, and I don't think Pyroar will take you very far against Charlotte. The classic strategy is to teach a pokemon Rain Dance, and your best pokemon for that right now would be Greninja, I'd probably take off Lick for that. As for Pokemon swaps? I'd suggest taking out Pyroar for a trained up Floatzel. Does your Ninetales have drought? You don't want that in this battle, it will only help her. Once you get rid of the sun with Rain, you can easily leave Krookodile in to EQ everything, but it'd probably be best if you had something to go along side it that is immune to it like a Flying type.

    I dont have Rain Dance... I didn't know i would get stuck in agate Circus...and i couldnt beat the Aqua leader yet, so i was going to wait...

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