LeMasterJP

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH

I hope she has a burn heal hahahahahaha most used pokemon joke in the entire universe Also her skin is really smooth, I'd expected it to be a bit more Macaulay culkin

After seeing the spontanious respond of mrs. Absolute_Zero I would like to revise my words. I really really like it, and I would even love to see more, that's why I try to criticise it as best as I can so you can make it even better! The confrontation is great, but what makes a confrontation even greater is the build up. When the tension rises before the confrontation and I'm shaking in my seat from anxiety that's when I know the confrontation will be best. Of course the actual conversation shouldn't be a letdown then, that'd be very anti-climactic, but I'm sure that won't be a problem for y

I just read the second one (fernfiction) and I do like it but I have the feeling of being thrown in the middle of something and not staying untill the ending. I'm guessing you're continuing it or was it a one chapter story? Would be a shame, I think there is more value to get out of it as trump would say Again very well written with no gram errors as far as I can tell

I hate being so black and white. Thanks for enlightening me, I think it'd be cool to know someone who denounced their gender, I bet they're very interesting. Edit: I just found the time to read it, have been very busyish lately I really loved it, it was supersweet and well written, if there is someone who enjoys good grammar it's me, but I like a good story even better

Maybe they'll have both. God damn lucky bastards now I'm jealous But no I can't really imagine it either.

nobody loves xe* how ingorant... hehe and I love xe, xe's adorable Does anyone know how it works with non-binary people, or at least Decibel and the blonde, and their privates? I'm a pervert very curious

Didn't know his last name was LaRue, so french, no wonder he's gay ;p

The Xe and Xyr is definitely somehting I've to get used to. But pretty cool!

And what about my gender!? I can't identify myself with anything! We need a legal gender change doctor in the lapis ward and an illegal one on 7th street. The illegal one does Pokemon too but has a 50% chance to screw it up and then the Pokemon immediately becomes confused when it is sent out in battle.

If I put on my "newspaper critic" face and were to review this, I'd say I don't know the story behind your poem. Most, if not all, poems use these mystical and magical sentences to 'hide' the deeper meaning behind the poem, such as the loss or gain of a lover, or sinking in depression or the gain of happiness. I think I miss that here. On the positive note, you just started (again), and I am certain you must merely swipe the rust of your skills and continue your work, I am certain with enough practice and perhaps if you follow my advice I'll be looking forward to reading another great poem of

Cain is my favourite character ever! I just don't like him always being so serious :Kappa:

Gurl, so I was totally hyped for battling charlotte. I had my strat all planned out, lickylicky + Golem, 1 explosion = double KO, send out levitator (elektross) and Golem follows up with earthquake = 4 dead fire pokemon and 1 dead licking gumball. I had it all planned out, HOWEVER!!!!! When my dear Lickylicky used explosion, it killed itself and NOTHING MORE, NO ONE TOOK DAMAGE. pls fix Q.Q, I mean I beat charlotte anyway (on te 8th attempt) BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT! Can I has bugfix? :3 Edit: Oh Uhm, I just tried using an iron ball fling with my machamp, and it doesn't do anything, it says

Ummm, I'm kindaaa new. What kinda server is this? (just for playin' pokemon on or what)

I like your thing