[Art: Spriting/Feedback] I (tried) Made A Trainer Sprite!

[JellyJYSK]

...I tried. I'm still learning and this is the first avatar sprite I've made.

Constructive criticism is advised xD

EDIT;;

Okay, I redid the sprite and I came up with this piece of work

Edited July 7, 2016 by JellyJYSK

[Dragon116]

I'm only seeing a movie poster. Are you sure this is a trainer sprite?

[Pocky]

Pretty nice, but just so you know to save in png instead of jpeg. PNG usually wields better looking images and keeps the transparent backgrounds.

[Dragon116]

It's a good shape and design. I would say the color palette needs work to give it more shading.

[Commander]

Some of the details are a bit hard to see since this is like Gen III sized sprites (I prefer bigger sprites tbh since they are easier to spot detail). Only glaring error I can spot are the black lines around her skirt. It's not what you did was necessarily wrong, but it isn't consistent with the rest of the sprite and a dark border for a very light color doesn't mix all that well. I'm not really a spriter though so my feedback is rather limited.

[JellyJYSK]

Some of the details are a bit hard to see since this is like Gen III sized sprites (I prefer bigger sprites tbh since they are easier to spot detail). Only glaring error I can spot are the black lines around her skirt. It's not what you did was necessarily wrong, but it isn't consistent with the rest of the sprite and a dark border for a very light color doesn't mix all that well. I'm not really a spriter though so my feedback is rather limited.

I fixed the black lines! I agree that they did NOT look attractive, so I fixed them! :3 Thanks for the advice and help! ^ v ^

It's a good shape and design. I would say the color palette needs work to give it more shading.

Im not good at shading, but I tried to put depth into the skirt. Only the skirt. lol :3

Pretty nice, but just so you know to save in png instead of jpeg. PNG usually wields better looking images and keeps the transparent backgrounds.

Wow, you're right! I made the picture bigger and saved it with PNG. Look at that lovely majestic transparent background -swoon-

I'm only seeing a movie poster. Are you sure this is a trainer sprite?

O-oh... does the movie look good at least? xP

[Dragon116]

O-oh... does the movie look good at least? xP

It looks like the sound of music.

[JellyJYSK]

It looks like the sound of music.

...That's... good, right?

[Anthony810]

How did we get from sprite to movie? O.o

Edited July 13, 2016 by Anthony810

[Crow_BlackFeather]

As a spriter myself it needs some black outlining you can't have just pure color as the outlining for parts of the sprite there has to be a bit of black.