lovekitten3000 Posted March 22, 2015 Share Posted March 22, 2015 Hi guys, so recently I tried tried making some sprites (because why not xD) and I would like to hear your feedback on them @.@ Here they are, I would like to see what you guys think of them Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gentleman's Hat Posted March 22, 2015 Share Posted March 22, 2015 Impressive! The girl's hairstyle to me looks exactly like Fluttershy's if she was human. Now I hope you are open to criticism, I can't help but notice the girl's eyes on the full body outlook just appear to be a dot compared to the boy's. And this might be nitpicking but the close up trainers' hair are facing the opposite direction. But other than that keep up the good work! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovekitten3000 Posted March 22, 2015 Author Share Posted March 22, 2015 Thanks for the feedback hmm it's weird because I made it so that their eyes are approximately the same size, maybe it's just hard to see and I made it so that they're facing the opposite direction xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrathOfTheLamb Posted March 22, 2015 Share Posted March 22, 2015 i think you did amazing but the girl's eyes are a bit too bright to tell there is any green on her battle sprite. i CAN see it, but it's a bit difficult at the same time. maybe try a darker color? but other than that, these are awesome! i wish i could do sprites this well for my game. i am having a hard time... hell, maybe you can give me a few pointers! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacobliterator Posted March 22, 2015 Share Posted March 22, 2015 Not bad, not bad at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovekitten3000 Posted March 26, 2015 Author Share Posted March 26, 2015 So i made another sprite @.@ what do you guys think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heloo5t5 Posted March 26, 2015 Share Posted March 26, 2015 ^this one could be a devious butler that plots to take over the mansion I like it. Man you're good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovekitten3000 Posted March 26, 2015 Author Share Posted March 26, 2015 haha xD thanks dude Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovekitten3000 Posted March 27, 2015 Author Share Posted March 27, 2015 here's another sprite xD i'm just binge-spriting this week @.@ what do u guys think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nova Posted March 27, 2015 Share Posted March 27, 2015 here's another sprite xD i'm just binge-spriting this week @.@ what do u guys think These sprites are cool! Just to remind you, you don't have to use black outlines everywhere. It's sometimes best to just use a dark shade of the color next to it for the outline, such as pink at the hair in this picture above. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBD Posted March 27, 2015 Share Posted March 27, 2015 (edited) You know what why don't you try enter silver league pixel art in revive. If you know what it is http://www.thesilverleague.com/pa---pair.php and his youtube channal is here:https://www.youtube.com/user/SilverLeagueNetworks/featured there are so many damn good sprite in the show. Edit:and if you want to see my revive post well...I am not a pixel artist and I don't wanna judge them.If I gonna judge them well...I will be back then. Edited March 27, 2015 by BBD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovekitten3000 Posted March 27, 2015 Author Share Posted March 27, 2015 These sprites are cool! Just to remind you, you don't have to use black outlines everywhere. It's sometimes best to just use a dark shade of the color next to it for the outline, such as pink at the hair in this picture above. yea, i tend to use black outline for a lot of stuff, it just looks cool xD but yea i'll try to fix that You know what why don't you try enter silver league pixel art in revive. If you know what it is http://www.thesilverleague.com/pa---pair.php and his youtube channal is here:https://www.youtube.com/user/SilverLeagueNetworks/featured there are so many damn good sprite in the show. Edit:and if you want to see my revive post well...I am not a pixel artist and I don't wanna judge them.If I gonna judge them well...I will be back then. @.@ sounds interesting also, this may sound dumb but... what is a revive post? xD sorry im a noob Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBD Posted March 27, 2015 Share Posted March 27, 2015 yea, i tend to use black outline for a lot of stuff, it just looks cool xD but yea i'll try to fix that @.@ sounds interesting also, this may sound dumb but... what is a revive post? xD sorry im a noob just post of my opinion or what I think of your spite. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovekitten3000 Posted March 27, 2015 Author Share Posted March 27, 2015 just post of my opinion or what I think of your spite. omg xD please do! i really want to hear everyone's opinion on my sprites, pixel artist or not Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBD Posted March 27, 2015 Share Posted March 27, 2015 (edited) Well if you insist,it might sound bad but here go Hi guys, so recently I tried tried making some sprites (because why not xD) and I would like to hear your feedback on them @.@ Pink haired girl:sprite:no shading on the shirt,you should outline face and hand because it look like she is shining hair is pillow shaded whitch is not good but not a big deal mug shot:it is not bad.look pretty good to me but the shirt need a bit shading Last thing to mention is the sprite and Mug shat is NOT MATCH where is the flower and why if the hair that cover her left eye cover her right eye in the sprite. The guy in the middle:sprite:is his arm is too short or the company that made this hoodie wanna make a shirt that look like that?the hood look too big and ้the shade should be up to his left sholder not elbow mug shot:just put a darker shade on top of his neck The guy with cool looking hair:one thing,put more shading on that suit and shirt So i made another sprite @.@ what do you guys think? his left eye is gone,I mean it.If he has leftt eye it should peak out of his hair a little bit.more shading on the bow,connect his fore finger line and last thing out line that hair on his side.oh and change that black outline on his right ear. here's another sprite xD i'm just binge-spriting this week @.@ what do u guys think over all this is good.Shading and outline look a bit weird so if you can make he look better do it. all this look good you just need to practice your shading skill more and one thing pillow shading like that girl hair may look good but it make that look not real at all that it hope you ok with my review oh and I did spell wrong "revive==>review" sorry that I made you confuse. Edited March 28, 2015 by BBD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovekitten3000 Posted March 28, 2015 Author Share Posted March 28, 2015 Well if you insist,it might sound bad but here go Pink haired girl:sprite:no shading on the shirt,you should outline face and hand because it look like she is shining hair is pillow shaded whitch is not good but not a big deal mug shot:it is not bad.look pretty good to me but the shirt need a bit shading Last thing to mention is the sprite and Mug shat is NOT MATCH where is the flower and why if the hair that cover her left eye cover her right eye in the sprite. The guy in the middle:sprite:is his arm is too short or the company that made this hoodie wanna make a shirt that look like that?the hood look too big and ้the shade should be up to his left sholder not elbow mug shot:just put a darker shade on top of his neck The guy with cool looking hair:one thing,put more shading on that suit and shirt his left eye is gone,I mean it.If he has leftt eye it should peak out of his hair a little bit.more shading on the bow,lconnect his fore finger line and last thing out kine that hair on his side.oh and change that black outline on his right ear. over all this is good.Shading and outline look a bit weird so if you can make he look better do it. all this look good you just need to practice your shading skill more and one thing pillow shading like that girl hair may look good but it make that look not real at all that it hope you ok with my review oh and I did spell wrong "revive==>review" sorry that I made you confuse. xD i guess i need to work on my shading, @.@ damnnnn thanks for the review xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lovekitten3000 Posted March 29, 2015 Author Share Posted March 29, 2015 my 2nd female sprite :3 what do you guys think? xD not particularly proud of this one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBD Posted March 29, 2015 Share Posted March 29, 2015 my 2nd female sprite :3 what do you guys think? xD not particularly proud of this one Her hair is so bright also good one,like that dress pattern. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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