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    Gen 3 - Shiny Thread | Public Development

    in Pokemon Rejuvenation

    Posted

    15 hours ago, Felcatty said:

    @Cyanna Cyril I was wondering if this is what you may have had in mind, if so, I don't mind finishing it for you:
    252s.png253s_1.png254s.png254_1s.png

    I just wanted to say that these look really good. Only treecko stands out a bit though. Because the rest of the line has 'extra' colours (green, blue, red...). Maybe you can give the tail a different colour to match the other sprites? But it lookes amazing either way ;) 

    Pokemon Desolation Episode 5

    in Fan-game Exposé

    Posted

    1 minute ago, Atlas105 said:

     

    Actually I believe at some point Connor says he was simple training those weaker pokemon. It's not his real team cause he tells you that he will battle you again once he gets his real team back.

    Actually, that's what I meant as well. I just worded it poorly. But thanks for clarifying anyway :) 

    Pokemon Desolation Episode 5

    in Fan-game Exposé

    Posted

    Alright, so I just started playing this and wanted to give my opinion. I'm currently at the second gym leader so I'll only give my opinion on the content up to that point.

    I'll start by saying that I really like the game so far, mainly because of the story. I'll name some actual examples so it's clearer.

     

    I like the moment when you discover the bomb. The sudden change in music really gives the feeling of urgency and something bad happening. The only thing that upset me is that we left the sylveon below decks behind... Just kidding! It didn't really upset me, but it is sad for the sylveon. Maybe remove it after you've found the bomb? Or maybe you could do something with that sylveon later on in the story somehow? Personally I'd like that, such a small detail coming back later in the story. But it's up to you.

     

    One thing: after we find the bomb we have to go to a certain spot on the deck. I talked with all the people there and two said the same thing as before the bomb. Considering the current situation, it's a bit weird. Here's what they said:

    1: im so excited. The captain said we'd arrive soon.

    2: Did you know that the ayrith region has six seperate islands which are all entirely unique? Also, each island is ruled by, some are nice, others... not so much. Dont worry though, this ship is going to cellia city. Its really warm and everyone is so nice there!

    Just a small thing you might want to change.

     

    Alright, after that. First of all I really like the fact that you can choose an alternative starter pokemon. It's a bit different form other games and that makes it interesting. But I am curious as to what happens to the pokeballs you leave behind? Maybe you can use that later in the story? Like, you encounter the people those pokemon originally belonged to? (if they survived, that is...).

     

    Also, Connor's character. At the beginning he's a jerk, but as the story proceeds you find out he's not so bad after all. In my opinion this makes him a well created character because he's not perfect, he's 'flawed'. And it gives a bit of character development. Also, love the tiny hints that he's afraid of the dark. Maybe you can let that come back later in the story? You also give a good explenation as to why he has a 'weaker' team. Just one sentence and it's explained.

     

    A couple of smaller points:

    I think the fire animation when you talk with Connor also looks nice.

    There's also some dialogue that doesn't fit in with the current intro, but I think that's been said already?

    When I evolved my flabebe at level 19, it's level dropped back to 16? Not a huge problem, but I thought I'd mention it.

    Also, the ring where you fight Kuiki? There are some of the old sprites of the villagers left.

    And after the first gym, when Ava catches up to you? She gives a nice hint about you going back to Connor and Scarlett. I thought I'd try it out and there was actually a point to it!

    In the mountain, I think it's the first battle, there's a small typo. He says: just because you bet me. (has to be beat).

    And whenever I encounter a scatterbug there's no sound, no pokemon 'cry'?

     

    And I read somewhere that we could give potential ideas for the game? I've got one:

    Maybe you can use a pokemon's 'power' at some point in the story? A power that's mentioned in the pokedex? Here's two examples:

    - Beheeyem: it's pokedex entry says: it can manipulate an opponents memory. Maybe have someone use a beheeyem to change of wipe someone's memory?

    - Gothitelle: it's pokedex entry says: when it learns its trainers life span, it cries in sadness. Use that to foreshadow a death?

    And you might want to use cresselia at some point? Because the theme has a lot to do with dreams and so does that pokemon?

    But it's up to you if you want to use it!

    Gen 3 - Shiny Thread | Public Development

    in Pokemon Rejuvenation

    Posted

    So, I made the mega a bit different, but I think I can get away with it... cause its a mega

    And I made two different versions (I had one thing in mind and changed it halfway. Decided to just post them both)

    Mega swampert.pngMega swampert B.png

    Mega swampert 1.pngMega swampert B 1.png

    Also, Jan, do you have the rest of the mudkip line complete now? I did post all of them a while ago, but I'm not sure if you got them and if they're all allright now?

    And, if these are alright, I'd like to claim plusle/minun as well and, yes, I'm counting them as one line...

    Gen 3 - Shiny Thread | Public Development

    in Pokemon Rejuvenation

    Posted

    10 minutes ago, Jan said:

    Perhaps we could make liberties and do something like this:

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    It's a shiny anyway, so I think we could get away with removing some of the white from the belly to the face. It'll just regain this in its evolution.

    You know what, I like that solution. Lets go with that. 

    Do you prefer marshtomp to be pink or red? Some people mentioned that red might be better for the consistency, but I made it a slightly different colour on purpose: because the non shiny colour is different as well. 

    And can I claim torkoal? I have something I want to try and I did finish the swellow line already...

    Gen 3 - Shiny Thread | Public Development

    in Pokemon Rejuvenation

    Posted · Edited by KmK

    17 minutes ago, Jan said:

    hm... This is slightly better, but it still looks a little off and I actually don't know what to do with this one.

    Soo... I'm not entirely sure what to do either.

    I already liked that one.

    But I tried some different colours, maybe that's better?

    Marshtomp 2.pngMarshtomp 3.pngMarshtomp 4.pngMarshtomp 5.png

    Edit: and because it was suggested:

    Mudkip G.pngSwampert G.png

    Made the whiskers gray...

    Gen 3 - Shiny Thread | Public Development

    in Pokemon Rejuvenation

    Posted

    38 minutes ago, Bazaro said:

    The white pixels on the fins need to be darker to blend, they stick out way too much. Also, the red skin has a grey outline, which causes some parts to looks weird. This is especially the case around the legs and arms

    Whelp, and I just thought I was getting better...

    Just kidding. I completely missed that, thanks for pointing it out!

    Marshtomp 1.pngMarshtomp.png

    I still like the one on the right better though...

    Gen 3 - Shiny Thread | Public Development

    in Pokemon Rejuvenation

    Posted · Edited by KmK

    31 minutes ago, Jan said:

    I think I like the white more, but what do you think?

    I think the white looks much better indeed. Ill have to see if it fits with the evolutions as well. 

    Edit: So I think it suits swampert as well. I dont like marshtomp though.

    I either have to change the white in the middle or the white on his belly (the round part).

    What do you think?

    Marshtomp.pngSwampert 1.png

    Gen 3 - Shiny Thread | Public Development

    in Pokemon Rejuvenation

    Posted · Edited by KmK

    11 minutes ago, Anti_Hero said:

    I want Duskull line (is it okay to work on Dusknoir too?)

    I'm pretty sure you can. I think Jan's fine with it because it's the same line and it keeps things consistent.

     

    Edit: here they are.

    I'm so glad I was fast enough to claim these. I already made the front sprites of the mudkip line and had this really nice idea for swellow...

    Taillow.pngTaillow B.png

    Swellow.pngSwellow B.png

    Mudkip 1.pngMarshtomp 1.pngSwampert.png

    Obviously I still have to make the backsprites and the mega. But I thought I'd wait to see what you think of them first.

    Gen 2 - Shiny Thread | Public Development

    in Pokemon Rejuvenation

    Posted · Edited by KmK

    I already made a skarmory before gen 2 started, so I decided to post a new one.

    Skarmory.pngSkarmory 1.png

    There's a slight difference in the green on the wings.

    I'll make a backsprite of whichever one you prefer.

    If you like them of course.

    Edit: so I just realized that the backsprite doesn't show the green part at all.

    So, here's the backsprite

    Skarmory B.png

    Unless if you'd prefer to have the back of the wings green as well

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