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  1. My first fanfic in quiet some time. I keep getting this story in my head so I'm gonna type it out and place it here for you guys to read.

    Plot: Stray and wild Pokemon of Reborn try to live in the harsh environment of the city. Some believe it is best to side with humans, while others rebut and fear the idea of being captured by them. The story follows one young Poochyena through his struggles in this world and through the hard choices that come with it.

    Feedback Topic: http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=19724

    Take note that I do NOT have an editor for this. I'm editing it on my own so if I miss anything, do not hesitate to mention it in the feedback topic. I greatly appreciate any and all feedback you guys have to help make this a better story.

    THE DWELLERS

    Reborn fan fiction written by FeralGator

    Prologue

    Lightning crackled across the sky, turning a pitch black stormy night into a second long day of horror. There standing overtop the ledge was one heavy furred female Mightyena. Her red nose dipped downward as her eyes lay unmoving from their aimed target. Next to her grey and black furred body stood another Mightyena. Together, they had a presence that most would avoid. Apart however, and it was clear whom among the two was in charge.


    “One less mouth to feed,” growled the female of the two.


    “C’mon now. That used to be one of ours…” the male then broke in. “Couldn’t you show a bit of sympathy for him?” His ears shot back as a glare was cast in his direction. Thunder rolled at that perfect time, just as it seemed to be doing this entire night, aiding in the fear that the female was casting off.


    “We do not mourn the loss of a mouth, Derek,” she instructed him with a kind of soft intensity. Derek nodded quickly, understanding his alpha before looking back to the beta that now lay dead in the putrid waters. He knew that the alpha was right in what she said. The loss of this Mightyena just meant that it would be easier all around to feed the rest of the pack. The only problem was the relationships he had gained in his time among the ranks.


    “To those that joined the search, let us return to the rest. Garret is lost to us. His body is lost to our young. We will hunt in the morning.” The alpha then began to walk off with only two others accompanying her. Derek, however,r was not among them. “Derek that means you as well!” she called out.


    “I will join you momentarily my alpha! I just…. need to….-”


    “-You need to follow along!” she interrupted with a quick dart of her head back to stare at the other Mightyena. “Get your skinny ass back in ranks. The last thing I need is for some human to see you alone and attempt to capture you.” Derek sighed and looked from the body of Garret back to his alpha.


    “Yes, alpha,” he sighed as he walked back over to them.


    “Honestly Derek. Why you are my beta is beyond even my own understanding sometimes.. Why if I had my way I would-“ Her words began to trail off for Derek. He had taken the time to look back to the edge as he walked further and further away from it, ears flattening as he made a silent prayer for his friend. His alpha wasn’t in the wrong, not at all. He could never feel that she was. Derek just honestly wished that she could show more of what the rest could never see.


    For a Mightyena however, such things could mean life or death consequences.


    ~~~~~


    “Tackle me, Johanna!” cried Prince as he dipped from left to right. The smaller gray and black Poochyena was energetic as ever despite the storm that was currently going on. The lightning often would stop the play between him and his brother, opting instead for a quick dart under the nearest Mightyena. The group would then laugh a bit, taking some enjoyment from their young members.

    “Maybe this can wait until the storm is over… huh, Prince?” asked Johanna. Prince nodded a bit after the two picked their heads up from underneath the extra fur that Albert had, chuckling themselves as they both agreed to wait out the storm. As fun as this play fighting was, it had more moments where they cringed in fear than when they would tackle in bravery.


    “It won’t be long before Alpha Killa returns,” marked Morrison as he looked to Prince and Johanna. His ears fell back when he stared at them. There was some form of guilt in their movement, even though none of it was truly directed towards the pups. “I hope she’s found Garret and a few other females…”


    “Don’t even talk about that savage,” groaned Percy.


    “Knock that conspiracy shit out of here, Percy. You know as well as I do that Garret was a strong wolf capable of bringing in food!” snarled Morrison. They were both the muscle of the pack, having hauled in more kills than anyone else save for the beta and alpha. They were like a guardians left behind to defend the weaker ones from trainers and who knows what else. That didn’t mean that they were without their faults though. While Morrison was overly trusting of his pack mates, Percy was the exact opposite. He trusted some, yes, but he held serious grudges against others. Garret just happened to be one of them.


    “Conspiracy my ass, Morrison! I saw him taking parts of the kill out of the territory a few nights back! And even then I saw the same thing last week! And before that even and-!”


    “Alright, alright! Sheesh you’re a whiny little pup, aren’t ya’?!” Morrison spat as he placed a paw over the other Mightyena’s muzzle to shut him up. He chuckled just then and gently patted Percy’s head before getting up to walk away from him. Percy remained there, grumbling to himself over Garret and the situation at hand. It was hard for anyone to make it out as anything but gibberish, though no one honestly tried.

    “Let’s just hope we see more females coming back with her. Dahlia isn’t going to make it much longer… we’re going to need another female if we want to survive,” Morrison then sighed as he walked over to their sickly member. She was barely breathing and barely cognitive. Anything said about her now would certainly go unheard and unnoticed. He went to sit by her, laying his head gently over her shoulder. “Why did you have to drink it?”


    Another string of lightning and a roar of thunder once again prompted the two pups to press under Albert. He chuckled, letting them hide as he curled himself around them. “It’s okay pups. The storm can’t get you. Not down here at least.” Their alleyway home was a decrepit one that lead to a dumpster in between two large buildings. The rain was still able to pelt them all, but it was merely just a trifle at this point. In all fairness, the rain reaching them was cherished. It still had some kind of purity to it that the sludge and slime of their drinking water didn’t. Still, it was not without its aggravations from time to time.


    “Drink the rainwater… at least try to Dahlia. Please…” pleaded Morrison. The female gave no response. Her breathing so low it was barely even visible through her small belly. She hadn’t spoken since her pups had been born. They were all sick and weak. Too weak to ever survive. The alpha had them killed when it was shown they wouldn’t be of use, leaving the mother devastated to say the least. “It wasn’t your fault…” he told her. She’d already been sick during her pregnancy, and knew well that her pups had a high chance of contracting her disease. Still, it was painful to have to know their true fate.

    “Dahlia will be okay,” barked out Prince. “She’s a strong Mightyena!” Morrison looked to Prince with a weak smile, nodding as he responded back.

    “Yes Prince. Dahlia is indeed a strong Mightyena. The strongest of us all.”

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  2. Pokemon red and blue! First played it on the playground in 3rd grade when someone had it. Asked if I could see it and they said yeah.

    First Pokemon I ever ran into and caught was a Meowth. Until just... like.... 3 years ago maybe...(?) Meowth has been my top favorite Pokemon. Ahh the good old days of Red and Blue. Can't wait to relive those when they are released in the Eshop. OuO

  3. I am an alligator. I make gator noises.

    *noises*

    Yeah.... there we go that sounds right. How would one describe a gator noise? lol

    Wait can I even be a gator? If not mark me as a umm.... uhhhh...... a Bull. Cause I don't know.

  4. You seem to already got tons of ideas how to beat Arceus, but the thing that got my attention is your current team.

    Emolga at this part of the game is outclassed by pretty much everything. Why not use Ampharos? Or you could go back and get Galvantula or even further to get Magnezone (even Magneton is much better than Emolga)

    With Magnezone you could also get rid of Mawile and put Sylveon in the team.

    I do have my little Zepher I can raise. I've kept Emolga in my team for so long because he's actually gotten me out of a ton of scrapes because of his speed. But I'm not against trying new team set ups. I've never raised a Magnezone so that will certainly be an interesting experience. Thank you for the suggestions! ouo/

    I freaking love Galvantula by the by, but I really don't want to go through all the hassle of beating all the bulls and bugs to get the event to happen. At least not right now. lol

  5. Sturdy will help you wont get blown up with 1 move since sturdy= focus sash. Reason why any two pokemon with EQ+ Sturdy should net you a win. you dont need to even bother bout the lvls of the EQ+sturdy pokemon they will get off a EQ every time due to sturdy making them not die with 1 move. EV why even bother Ev training the EQ+Sturdy pokemons when they are gonna die after doing their EQ.

    Pfft oh yeah I forgot you had mentioned sturdy. Okay now see that will be useful. I'll need to look into Pokemon that have that. Thank you!

    you can just use one ghost, one normal pokemon, swap between the two until he can only use recover/struggle,

    then you put your power mons out and wipe.. its worked twice for me.

    It knows Shadow Ball though? My Banette even now is one shot from that. How'd you get that to work for you?

  6. DITTOCEUS™

    I'm stealing that. Hope you don't mind.

    if you do feel free to sue me.

    That said, welcome to Reborn. Alligator-lovers, crocodile-lovers, Reborn has 'em all.

    Probably.

    Enjoy your stay ; )

    i was jk btw. plz dont sue me

    XDD Use it however you like! My croc lawyers won't bite you for it. They're trained to only go after the chicken I dangle in front of them. 8P

    To everyone remembering the gator-wars, bahahahahahaha, I wish I could have seen that! It sounds like it was one heck of a time! I remember how it was on Twitch but still, it would have been neat to see it here. lol

    Oh gosh so many warm welcomes. You are all wonderful people so I know that I'll do really well here! Thank you everyone so very much! Also thank you for the warm wishes against Dittoceus. I'm still struggling against him but I know that he will some day die to my hand. It's only a matter of time. >3

    DOWN WITH THE FAUX-GOD!

  7. donphan and Golem can EQ the field 2 times to make it collapse. Basically any 2 pokemon with EQ+sturdy can help you if you do not want to use gimmick pokemon like murkrow/Magneton/sturdy+metal burst pokemon(Bastiodon/Aggron).

    I honestly never think any Pokemon is a gimmick Pokemon. I mean, if I have to actually work my ass off to raise them up then I deserve to use the moves that they have. 8/

    My Camerupt has EQ as well but can get one shot easily by Arceus. I don't EV train, so I don't really think a Golem will be any better. My Donphan most likely wouldn't be any better either on that regard.

    You could side with El and just progress in the story if you want to. Of course that is only if you dont mind not beating it

    Of course I will never side with El. He's a prick. l'D

  8. You can soft-reset and catch it again. But it is up to you.

    Ahhh okay. Cool. Yeah Ima do that. As good as Brave Bird is, I really want to have some sort of chance against Dittoceus. lawl

    Murkrow gets Perish Song by breeding with Altaria. If you don't wanna bother with that, go catch a Magnemite and train it up, Sturdy+Mirror Coat oughta kill the Arceus in one shot.

    That's a good idea as well! Thank you. ouo

  9. Murkrow is in the Aqua Alley on a Windy Night.

    Focus Sash can be found below the Grand Stairway hidden on a Rock if you go a certain path where the ledges divide into four paths (iirc the most eastern). There's also one in the Byxbysion Grotto.

    Awesome thank you! I'm going to try to get that Murkrow as well as check out where the sash would be. Lookout you deviously beautiful burb I'm coming for you! >3

    EDIT

    Caught Murkrow but he knows only Wing Attack, Night Shade, Assurance and Brave Bird.

  10. Welcome to Reborn, Feral!!

    I hope that you enjoy your stay here at Reborn!\

    See ya around~ ^_^

    Good luck on Ditto by the way.. :wacko:

    I'm really enjoying it so far actually! Everyone is very nice and welcomeing! ANd yes, thank you very much. That Dittoceus is going down I swear it. >C

  11. If you have any focus sash, give it to Banette and use destiny bond.

    Or catch the event murkrow which has perish song and prankster, that is another option :)

    THERE IS AN EVNET MURKROW?!

    Oh my gosh I must find it. Even if it doesn't help my team, I need me my Honchkrow baby. Also I don't think I have the focus sash. I'll need to research how to get it if I don't have it. I'm thinking though it's at the dojo place.

  12. Welcome-

    ...gator, you say? **Flashbacks of the Gator wars**

    Hast thou returned, vile beast...

    Be careful of all gators, Feral. One in particular has damaged Reborn greatly in the past. Sleep with an eye open and enjoy your time here.

    >u> Maybe I have, maybe I haven't? You will only know in time my friend. TuT

    And lawl oh? What gator is that? I hope it was me in another life. Or maybe me from the future coming back to the past from before I even came to this forum to create havor and mayham the likes of which no time traveling reptile has seen before? Mmmmmmm love me some paradoxes.

  13. Oh my gosh thank you everyone so, so much! I took the advice you guys gave, got a few sturdy graveler, raised up my Murkrow to a Honchkrow, gave it the Focus Sash, and I beat Dittoceus to the ground!!!

    I wouldn't have been able to do it if not for you all who helped! Thank you guys so very much! \QuQ/

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Okay so I'm struggling to beat the snot out of Dittoceus. He's a jerk. A big fat jerk! >C

    My team so far:

    Feraligatr (Feral) - female

    Lv. 59

    Ice Fang

    Crunch

    Aqua Tail

    Rock Smash

    Emolga (Neo) - male

    Lv.58

    Discharge

    Acrobatics

    Volt Switch

    Air Slash

    Mawile (jjJJJJAJjjjj ..... don't ask I didn't plan that) - female

    Lv.58

    Play Rough

    Crunch

    Iron Head

    Sucker Punch

    Camerupt (Rupture) - female

    Lv.60

    Eruption

    Earth Power

    Earthquake

    Iron Head

    Banette (GraveRobber) - male

    Lv.55

    Sucker Punch

    Will-O-Wisp

    Shadow Ball

    Destiny Bond

    Pangoro (Bamboo) - male

    Lv.57

    Work Up

    Crunch

    Hammer Arm

    Sky Uppercut

    BACK UP TEAMMATES

    Noivern (Boomer) - male

    Lv.49

    Air Slash

    Wing Attack

    Bite

    Roost

    Sylveon (Remy) - male

    Lv.54

    Psych Up

    Moonblast

    Draining Kiss

    Swift

    Cofagrigus (Pharoah) - male

    Lv.57

    Hex

    Will-O-Wisp

    Ominous Wind

    Shadow Ball

    Scolipede (Skolly) - female

    Lv.53

    Venoshock

    Toxic

    Rock Climb

    Steamroller

    Stoutland (Roni) - male

    Lv.59

    Work Up

    Crunch

    Giga Impact

    Fire Fang

    Ampharos (Zepher) - male

    Lv.48

    Tunderpunch

    Discharge

    Confuse Ray

    Power Gem

    Butterfree (Quip) - male

    Lv.44

    Bug Buzz

    Silver Wind

    Sleep Powder

    Psybeam

    Ariados (Gintin) - male

    Lv.40

    Struggle Bug

    Sucker Punch

    Shadow Sneak

    Night Shade

    Are there other Pokemon I should catch and raise? Moves I should edit? I'm not sure where I stand on the whole... hey you have a good team thing there but whatever.

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