Okay, first of all thank you for the criticizm it's very helpful, however the contrast problem is due to the conversion from Mac to PC, I had them all matching until then so I can't really apply it until tomorrow, I will put it into consideration though, I want to polish it as much as possible before I hand it over. The red cross would definitely sue me, you're out of fashion and thank you~
I think you're right about the effect, I'm not to keen on it myself, the first one was readable it's just a low quality image ;~;, What can I say I was inspired, besides I could only think of one suicide forest, I will definitely replace could with will good eye and I didn't mention "Whenever" at all.
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