Chase Posted July 22, 2015 Share Posted July 22, 2015 First off, ....Big dreams, small stature Twenty fo' years, watching chilluns an' pastors wonderin' where my heart is, to pasture, but the way I feel, it's a natural disaster. Years pass, wrinkles show, still no Masters No money, no food, not even a Bachelors Throwin' stones so hard, one can call me a spellcaster Trouble-town raised, yet ya' girl ain't changed, Brown hair, brown eyes, and somehow still stayed, Got no record of my own, but the label's still made, and I don't even have to say, what I've seen played. ....and I'm done. I hope some of that was actually...decent. Haha. 7 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomas Elliot Posted July 22, 2015 Share Posted July 22, 2015 From the title I thought this was going to be another rant about people mixing up the search bar and the status bar... But that aside it, I like it. It's hard for me to judge poetry in English, because I still don't have a full grasp of the pronunciation of some words, so I don't get all the rhymes... But still, the styl is there and the feels are there, I can tell that much 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avatar of Grima Posted July 22, 2015 Share Posted July 22, 2015 Twas very nice Hilda Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lostelle Posted July 22, 2015 Share Posted July 22, 2015 I like it. For some reason, I read it in Notorious B.I.G's voice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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