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  1. 1 hour ago, Lspaceship said:

    Dude, this is great. Only thing is that I'd make it so that the MC feels a bit older, as (to me at least) it feels like they're at age 10 or so like main-series games start trainers at. Due to all that happens in Rejuv, I'm not sure if that'd really work that well. But the fact that you're writing this is amazing, and I'm looking forwards to everything you can do!

    Yeaaahh, I can kinda see what you mean. In my head, the MC has a bit of a childish side to them but it's not supposed to be their entire personality. I probably didn't do the best job explaining their character, but it's only the first chapter so I'm not beating myself up over it. Either way, thank you for your kind words!

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