Yeaaahh, I can kinda see what you mean. In my head, the MC has a bit of a childish side to them but it's not supposed to be their entire personality. I probably didn't do the best job explaining their character, but it's only the first chapter so I'm not beating myself up over it. Either way, thank you for your kind words!
Hiya! It took me a bit to muster up the courage, but I just posted the first chapter of my Pokemon Rejuvenation Fanfic: Path of an Interceptor! Here's the link if you're interested: https://archiveofourown.org/works/33498700 Sorry in advance if there's anything off with my writing, I don't really write all that often and this the first Pokemon fanfiction I've ever written.