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  1. 6 hours ago, Posty said:

     

    could you chuck me your save if possible? i'll have a look cause this should have been fixed aha

    here! dunno if it matters with what y'all fixed, but i was 3/4ths of the way through the quest before updating to 6.3, and, while i don't remember exactly, there's a good chance i originally started it on the beta build tbh

    Game.rxdata

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  2. hi

    i relate to the needing to plan things so much. so, so much. i have an outline and i still need to plan.

     

    anyway, i said i'd pull quotes and i'm here to do so:

    Spoiler

    first up--

    6 hours ago, Mindlack said:

    It was also silent. Reborn City had been a city, and that meant noises: people walking in the streets, talking together, a few Pokemon battles, some quite original (sometimes truly unique) transportation means, and so on. Life, or whatever pretense of it which hadn't left the dying city yet. But Byxbysion was utterly silent.

    love this !!! i'm such a sucker for eerie silence being pointed out, especially when it's in a direct comparison, and byxbysion is the perfect place to do it!

     

    6 hours ago, Mindlack said:

    uncertain, stressful jumps from trash island to trash island

    pulling this just bc i like the phrase a lot

     

    6 hours ago, Mindlack said:

    It had ripped the suburb apart, bled it dry, fed its flesh to a slaughterhouse and was festering in the remains.

    this line!!! this line is so good!!! very very much so one of my favorite lines i've read/heard in a while!

     

    6 hours ago, Mindlack said:

    in some kind of demented construction game with other nearby collapsed buildings.

    "demented construction game" is so, so grand. 

     

    6 hours ago, Mindlack said:

    Holes that might have been windows in life had been enlarged with benches, a halo of cracks surrounding the openings.

    "might have been windows in life" + the halo bit is !!!,

    your metaphors and imagery are so on point this chapter, i really can't say it enough

     

    6 hours ago, Mindlack said:

    Yes, that made three halves, but psychology wasn't exactly mathematical either. 

    pulling this just bc it made me smile

     

    6 hours ago, Mindlack said:

    But victory wasn't mine to decide. It never had been.

    love this love this love this, especially in combo with "How could I feel so entitled, after what I had done?"

     

    also! aya's characterization here is extremely good! how relaxed she is in the wasteland, how she talks about her relationship with cain; how she talks about her job--all of her parts are really well done!!

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