So, I have played a pretty lot of (fan made) pokemon games by now. And this got me thinking about a storyline for another pokemon game. so I started writing a few pages. There is as of yet not character developments, only a chronological order of events for a pokemon game story. Also I've drawn a map of a possible world where this game could play out.
I was wondering what some people might think of this. The story hasn't got an ending yet, because the one I thought up was way to rushed.
the story and map are in the attachement
pokemon exiled.rtf