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  1. 2 hours ago, Mindlack said:

     

    That's what I'm saying: you're choosing from an "outside" perspective, based on what makes a better story/player experience (because out-of-story you knows you don't need to resurrect anyone to win, because you know it's going to end well).

     

    But isn't it kind of hard not to look at this from an "outside" perspective? I mean, we're the player. We are on the outside. And I don't know about you - but I thought over almost every decision I made in this game. Because I wanted to make the best decision. (or at least what I thought was.) So it also makes since to think this over too.

     

    That being said; I don't know if any of these are good choices.

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    Kiki would have died eventually due to her illness.

    Corey jumped off a bridge because he hated life.

    Eclipse died because she was a treater.

    Ame already died once to Lin's Hydreigon. You really think Lin wouldn't kill her again just because she could?

    And Tara, to me, isn't really that important. Sure her and Simon's story is sad. But I don't think I would rather her over one of the other characters be saved.

    (I'm sorry if this sounded harsh or cold hearted. I wasn't trying to be - this is just what I think personally.)

     

    If this poll is ever done again, I suggest adding more characters maybe? I mean there's still some in the shadow realm.

  2. 42 minutes ago, gilam said:

     

    do you know if it need to go up to 100?

    or because V13 part 2 it's not.

    I'm sorry. What...?

     

    Are you trying to ask them "How do you know if it needs to go up to 100%? It's not even part 2."? Yeah, it's not part 2. But when part 1 is done they're going to release it. And then when they're ready they will work on part 2. We shouldn't rush things.

  3. Did someone say shipping?

     

    My ships are Taka x MC, Hardy x Aya, Cain x Charlotte, Florinia x Julia, Ciel x Samson, and Radomus x Serra.

     

    I don't really ship anyone with Luna, Lin, Titania, and Amaria, but Luna with Taka sounds cute.

     

    On 1/10/2021 at 4:37 AM, Black Hoof said:

    I would like Radomus and Gardevoir (if she's brought back) to finally jump in and do it.

    Why I don't see them being together (since Gossip is a pokemon), I definitely see them being a one sided romance. With her having feelings for him, but him not returning said feelings.

  4. 11 hours ago, Tikkit said:

    I mean, we already have Zygarde. Two legendaries amongst this particular trio seems overkill storywise. And it's not like Melia is automatically going to get it. And even is she did... So what? We're going to get it regardless, since every pokemon will be available by the final version.

    Yeah, that is true. But doesn't the player get to decide weather or not they use Zygarde?

     

    Also, the comment about Melia was just a joke. I'm sorry if it wasn't funny...

  5. On 10/27/2020 at 6:06 AM, Display name said:

    It would make sense but the issue is that some of the interceptor's are not created naturally and we don't know if the protag is one of those

    That may be. But that doesn't mean the MC can't catch and use Xerneas on their team. Besides wouldn't that also be keeping the player from using certain Legendaries?

     

    On 10/26/2020 at 11:54 PM, LiterateTerrarian said:

    Just a thought i had given the nature of the Protagonist and how they are essentially immortal. My main thought was how does the interceptor return to life after dying? I feel like the Protagonist is linked to Xerneas. I don't really have much to base this on other than the fact that it truly makes our hero a foil to Madame X and her Yveltal, and the dex entries for Xerneas repeatedly state it can share eternal life. Just a thought. It'd be cool if we got to fight Madame X and her Yveltal alongside Xerneas in the climax.

    There actually is other things to base this theory on;

    Like the fact Xerneas hasn't been seen in the game yet (as of V12), despite being the main Legendary of the game and even the game's icon. So, there's a possibility it may show up in version V13.

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    The only question is: who will use it?

     

    I for one, would rather the MC using it, then someone else... (and it's not just because i want to use it.)

    Because it would be crappy if the story built up to that point and then had someone else catch the thing instead of us. Like, I don't know, Melia?

     

    You may defeat Madame X. But you may never have my giant reindeer!

  6. 10 minutes ago, Silver Boy said:

    Actually, better to play it now, because i have a very bad feeling that delevopers just drop the Reborn in favor of Starlight Divide

    They didn't drop the game completely. They're just taking a break from it to work on Starlight's demo.

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  7. 1 hour ago, StarGaming said:

    Awesome! What is your favorite one??

    Hmm... That's hard, because I love so many. 😅

     

    But if I could only choose one, I would say Flygon.

     

    What's your favorite?

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  8. 19 hours ago, J-Awesome_One said:

    YES! Very short part but I enjoyed it. It's weird to see her not want to do the league at 1st but I guess that's why I'm also into it. Can't wait for the next part! ^_^

    Oh, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. ^-^

     

    Next chapter she's going to meet all three rivals. So, it's going to be a lot longer then the first. (I'll probably have it in two parts to shorten it.)

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  9. Well, after two rewrites and almost a whole two months of planning and stress. It's finally here! The prologue. Yay! ......Ok, I won't lie - I'm kind of disappointed with myself. I shouldn't have worried and stressed over this as much as I did. Because writing fanfiction is suppose to be fun and there is a reason why they say you should write at your best. My feelings really effected how this turned out. So, I'm sorry if the prologue is bad. Hopefully I won't have as much trouble with the rest of the story. Also I hope it didn't effect Melanie's character.

     

     

                                                                                         Part 1: A Rocky Start

     

                                                                                                                        Prologue

     

     

    I awoke from my nap to the sound and feel of bumpy train tracks. With the train itself being extremely musty. I was a bit surprised that I got any sleep because of the smell. But the night before I got little to no sleep at all - me being too worried about the trip to Reborn City I would be taking the next day.

     

    And...just like that, I started to worry again.

     

    What was Reborn going to be like? Was it all just urban areas? What were the people going to be like? Heck, what were the Pokémon going to be like? 

     

    Is it going to be anything like Sinnoh?

     

    I shook my head. Maybe...I just needed some fresh air. I mean, the train was kind of stuffy.

     

    So, I stood up to open the window. Using the sleeves of my jacket to not hurt my palms as I did so. Just now realizing that we were in a desert, because of the hot air hitting my face.

     

    That’s great.’ I thought.

     

    But then, I noticed something, much worse...a dog-like Pokémon with white fur and a large horn staring at me.

     

    “Is...is that an Absol?”

     

    “Um..excuse me? Next please.” I heard someone say behind me.

     

    Startled, I jumped back into my seat. I looked up to see who it was - now embarrassed - to see a woman with snow-white hair looking back at me, with an almost amused look on her face and a clipboard in her hand.

     

    “Oh, sorry about that,” she snorted. “I didn’t mean to startle you.”

     

    “I-it’s ok. But what do you mean, 'it’s my turn'?” I asked, hoping that it wasn’t about my Boarding Ticket, as I had misplaced it. I was never good with these things…

     

    “Do you mind if I take a seat first?” I was relieved hearing that. But also curious, what did she want to talk about?

     

    “No, I don’t mind at all.”

     

    After my answer, she sat down in the set in front of me.

     

    “Well, first off. I’m Ame the manager of the Reborn League. Second, I’m coming back from some business out of town, so I figured I might as well get a head start on everyone’s registrations.” she explained. “Were you also going to sign up for it? It would be great if so.”

     

    “I…” The truth was I was going to say no. I already went through a League before, it being the Sinnoh League. One of the hardest ones in the world, and I failed. So I had no intention of trying another one.

     

    But after seeing the passion in Ame’s eyes, I started to worry if I said no. “I guess so.”

     

    “Excellent!” she said with glee. “I’m glad to finally get this thing off the ground again.”

     

    ‘Again? What happened to the last one?’ I thought, getting more and more nervous every minute.

     

    “The truth is,” Ame said with a more serious tone. “After the incident a few years ago, the whole region was almost completely abandoned...even by the Pokémon.”

     

    But after seeing my worried expression, she lightened up. “But don’t let that worry you! It may not be the ideal place, but our Gyms Leaders are like nothing you’ve seen before, and I think you’ll find Reborn to be a Region like no other too!”

     

    Now it did start to interest me more than worry me. I wondered what the Gyms would be like. How many Gyms would there be? Would there be eight or more? Gosh I hope not, I could hardly handle eight. Oh! Would there be a Fairy Gym?

     

    “Now that that’s settled, can I see your boarding ticket please?”

     

    ‘Crap.’ Now, I was back to worrying.

     

    I looked frantically around myself and in my purse for the ticket. Feeling the tension in the air, as both Ame and I started getting really nervous. Finally, I could feel something italic between my fingers in my purse and pulled it out - it being my ticket. There was a heavy sigh of relief from both of us.

     

    Hoping that it had no scratches on it, I handed my Boarding Ticket to Ame.

     

    “Hmm...Melanie Collins,” she mumbled, why writing it down on her clipboard. “Okay, I got you down.” She handed my ticket back to me. I put it back in my purse, glad that I wouldn't have to worry about it anymore.

     

    “Ok! We’re almost to Grand Station, so after we disembark, just follow me to the Grand Hall. There, I’ll give you a starter Pokémon to really kick off your adventure in Reborn. Sound good?”

     

    “Yeah, it does.” I answered, smiling. But for real this time.

     

    I wonder what Pokémon they have as starters? I already knew which one I was wanting to choose. But I didn’t know if they would have it or not.

     

    “Good, then if you’ll --,” Ame stopped, looking at something behind me with a very worrisome look on her face. “Um…” 

     

    I looked to see what it was; now terrified, because I could feel a presence watching me. Only to see that nothing was there.

     

    “Something’s not right...Shouldn’t we be decelerating already?”

     

    I looked back at her. ‘Wait, we’re supposed to be slowing down?’

     

    Then everything started going just as fast as the train was. Ame yelled something to me...but I didn’t hear what it was, before I was thrown out the window - with the sound of shattering glass and an explosion echoing through my ears.

     

    What happened?

     

    Character Ratings

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    Ame (4/10): She seems like a very kind and ambitious lady. But after seeing how passionate she was about the New League, I couldn’t refuse signing up. I didn’t want to disappoint her. I just hope that I didn’t make a mistake...

     

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  10. Uhh...the truth is I don't have that much. I deleted the three chapters I did have, because I wasn't happy with them. So now all I have is the prologue, which I'm unsure if I should even post yet.

     

    But, thank you. I'm still a bit worried, but what you said is reassuring. ^-^

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  11. 4 hours ago, Mindlack said:

    But I would be very wary to postpone your start to V13 – we’re at 41% and it’s been 8 months since V12. If you want to write it, I don’t think it’s good to procrastinate by that much.

    I'm going to be writing and posting my Reborn one first. So I hope this doesn't become a problem. I don't want people to lose interest...

    4 hours ago, Mindlack said:

    As long as you don’t get characters killed or shipped, any mistake is probably repairable (and even so, you can break relationships – see eg “Awesome Adventure” for Reborn – and the Rejuv plot gives us several factors capable of retconning a death, at the cost, possibly, of further plot intricacies).

    Oh, I haven't heard of that one before. I'll have to look into it, when I have the time. Because I'm still trying to get caught up with a couple of other written runs. Why trying to get my own ready to post.

  12. On 4/12/2020 at 7:03 PM, Mindlack said:

    About basing it off 100% of Rejuv's story... I don't like writing it (difference and originality bring value, I heard), but you're going to need to be very careful with your plot modifications.

    I'm confident that you can twist Reborn's plot to not fit the Big RevealTM (or Big RevealsTM) the dev team is planning for us, because you probably can also twist the ending -- and character relationships are well-established enough that we know what could conceivably happen in a barely alternate universe.
    But Rejuv has an insane amount of unknowns, which makes significant plot deviations very dangerous because you don't really know what you break.

    This is actually one of the reasons I thought about waiting for V13. I don't want to start posting the fanfic, only to have to go back and rewrite the whole thing because I got something wrong. There's just so many mysterys, that hopefully will be answered.

     

    I however, will still be making some changing to the story. I want to add something to Rejuvenation, not just tell the same story that the game is telling. And as I have seen people love it when there's changes or additions to the story. Also I indeed have some things I already know I want to change. Like Melia's character and that the MC never seems to get close to anyone. Of course I won't get into anymore details, as I don't want to give spoilers. But I will say it has to do with Crescent.

  13. 19 hours ago, Vinnie said:

    Have you tried the older version of OBS? It's kind of hard to find, but I found that I don't really like using the newer release. 

    Actually, no I haven't. x-x

     

    Do you remember what version it is by any chance? Maybe that will help me find it easier.

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