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@Asnaeb Sorry, I thought I had the right section. But thank you for telling me :)
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Update: Might have found a solution, but not completely certain quite yet. Hopefully this works out though
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I'm starting a story run of Reborn and since my character technically was in another region they have some Pokémon from there. They don't have to be strong (no stronger than 5 even) but I already know how I'm going to work them in, just not how I'm getting them. I can send my save file -might take me second to remember how- but I would appreciate the assistance. Thank you all in advance, I don't need them right away but sooner is better than later.
(Feel free to move this, or tell me where to move this if its in the wrong form)
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Thanks to @Candy for the Shiny Ralts and Gothita. I will be updating as soon a I get the insperation to. So sorry for the wait. Until then I'm fixing the other chapters
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Sorry I haven't done much. I've been a little buisy and a lot stressed.
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This is a really good start,and the writing is amazing. You know how to draw in your reader and keep them hooked the entire time, not to mention the way you are able to control the tome of the chapter.
You pointed out the Absol to create a sense of unease, as many pokemon fans know that Absol only appears for those who it wants to warn. By doing this you also let us have a glimpse into the mind of MRC. He's nervous about going somewhere he dosn't know. Both of these factors are the signs of a talented author or storyteller.
The fact that you didn't mention Julia kind of caught my attention, and I was wondering why that was. Julia was (to me) a very hard to miss person, due to her being so hyper. Perhaps she isn't so important in your run. But this is a first of the few that I have read.
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9 minutes ago, Candy said:
She's a pain in the butt to write but I can't say I dislike her either 😂
I'm gong to PM you when I finish this planing draft. I also get pains to write. I normally go darker so for me Alice is really hard
but what I have planed might be a shocker.
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1 minute ago, Candy said:
First of all, Cannula? Who the heck is that. Second, who are these random strangers and why do they feel entitled to judge me?
Well they asked for it.
- Alice: 3/10 You're probably a good person, but so flat. Not shocking, since you seem to be a prodigy, judging from your career so far. Your life must've been quite easy.
- Decibel: 4/10 None of your business. Trusting people is risky. I was under the impression that you were smart enough to understand this.
I love Vanilla 😁
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2 hours ago, Candy said:
Thx for reading~
Hey don't worry about it. The spoilers just for fun you don't have to participate if you don't want to
SpoilerDear Cannula,
Since you have been raiding the people around Reborn we thought it would be interesting rate You. Feel free to rate us in retur.
Alice- Cold and rude. Your not very nice to the people around you and are trying to be your friends. Your also berry bitter. 3/10
Decible- Something happened to you. I haven't fully figured out what nut I can't exactly fault you for not trusting people. You could be a bit nicer but we have a very similar view on Fern so good job (5/10)
If you do not wish to rate us that will be respected. Thank you for your time,
Decibel and Alice
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This is amazing so far
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7 minutes ago, Candy said:
If you hover over my name, you should see an option to send PM. If you can't find it, you can go to my profile and send me a message from there too
Thank you @Candy
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1 hour ago, Candy said:
So far the story seems fine but rule of thumb is this: the majority of people don't really like reading. On top of that, you're running Reborn, which story we already know.
So what does this mean?
Large walls of gray text aren't palatable to the average player.
Id suggest taking screenshots (and since you have several characters that deviate from the original storyline, use photo editing to add Radomus and Gardevoir in). Use color too, though how you use it depends on your ways. For my run, I used certain colors for major characters' dialogue. One more thing- what about adding in the pokemon's icons next to the name? That'd allow the reader know who "Min-min" is without needing to scroll down to check.
Hope that was helpful~ ganbatte!
Thank you. I'm moble at the moment. Hey do you know if there is a way to PM each other so you can give me a bit of assistance?
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This sounds like its going to be great
SpoilerFor any one who's intersted in my run
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Hey. I hope everyone likes this. I hope I don't sound pushy but I would love a bit of suport. Like, comment tell me how to improve. I enjoy this run (I will compleat it no matter what), but I want to improve. I can only do that with help. Sorry if my asking bugs you. You DO NOT have to do any of this. Also thank you @Candy for following. It means a lot to me.
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Shocking news about Radomus aside
Training was hard and long. Kind of boring if I was being honest. Me and Alice had returned to the Castle, and Radomus was again watching over out training contently.
"Both of you are at very similar levels," He called walking up. "I would like to see a battle between the two of you."
"Interesting idea Radomus." Alice smiled as Radomus lead us to the field. "You ready for this Decibel?"
"Yah, Nightshade, let's see what they are made out of! First Pokemon she sends out use Infestation!" I called sending out my first Pokemon.
"Pop, use perish song!" Alice called shocking both me and Radomus, who gasped as the attacks both hit. "Now switch out with Pooch!"
"Nightshade, return!" I called, with a smirk. "Stan take over! Use Fury Swipes!"
"Pooch, bite!" Alice called happily. Again both attacks hit. "Don't let up!"
"You too Stan!" I called smiling as Stan tossed Pooch off, before taking him out. "Now switch back out with Nightshade!"
"Alright, go Ice!" Alice smiled, "Use fury attack!"
"Infestation!"I smiled as Nightshade dodged the fury attack, sending tiny bug-lings towards Ice. The bug-lings quickly got to work biting at Ice.
"Absorb!" I called, wincing as Ice caught Nightshade in a strong Fury Attack, not to mention Nightshades attacks were not doing a lot of damage. "Try a constrict!"
"Harden Ice!" Alice called and I nodded. She was smart, strong and kind of cute. Constrict really didn't do much and sadly, the infestation died of, but I smiled as again Ice used harden.
"Get a second infestation started Nightshade!" I called smiling brightly.
"Keep hardening Ice!" Alice called, she had a plan. I could tell. But what it was I wasn't sure.
"Keep it up!" I called as Ice went for a Fury Attack, missing and getting a second bunch of bug-lings. A second furry attack and Nightshade almost fainted luckily the infestation did it's thing and Ice fainted.
"Good job Ice, now Killi your up next!"
"Spy, your up now!" I called taking a few deep breaths. Spy was still learning, and didn't have very many good attacks. But I trusted her, and I knew she could at least assist in taking down Killi.
"Bite!" Alice called and I nodded
"Covet." I nodded, smiling as Spy jumped over the attack and delivered a good blow. "Scratch!"
Again Spy was faster, attacking and then getting out of the way.
"Keep going Killi!" Alice called, and I winced as he garbed Spy's arm in his mouth. Luckily one final scratch knocked him out.
"You still good Spy?" I asked smiling as she nodded. "Then let's keep going!"
"Alright, Shell it's your turn!" Alice called. "Water gun!"
"Confusion!" I called smiling as Spy jumped over the water gun and hit the confusion. Sadly the second hit, and did a considerate amount of damage, almost knocking Spy out. "Alright Fang take over and use bite!"
Fang is fast, but this time Shell was faster, hitting fang with a water gun. Luckily Fang locked onto Shell, holding him tight. After a little bit, Shell fainted.
"Alright, your doing really good Decibel. But I still have two more Pokemon. Rat, it's your turn!" Alice smiled sending her out.
"Use bite again Fang!" I called nodding as the battle commenced.
"Quick attack!" Alice yelled proudly, as Rat's attack hit first, nearly knocking Fang out, luckily Fang did hit.
"Fang return! Bucky take over!" I called letting out the breath I didn't know I was holding as Rat nearly fainted. "One more headbutt!" This headbutt knocked Rat out, leading to her final Pokemon. Pop, the one Pokemon I somewhat feared.
"Alright this is the last one Bucky. Headbutt!" I called pulling my hair behind my ear. Letting out a small sigh, I smiled as Bucky hit not once but twice, knocking Pop out.
"Good job, both of you. I am extremely proud of your progress." Radomus smiled proudly, gently pulling us close. "Now let''s get those Pokemon healed."
Nodding me and Alice followed Radomus to the center. Handing our teams to Joy we sat at a small table. Shaking his head Radomus leaned back in his chair and I could tell something wasn't right. Something was bothering him.
"Want to talk about it?" I asked gently placing a hand on his shoulder. "I mean I'm willing to try to help."
"I know Decibel, it's just I fell like something is going to happen. Something we are not going to be able to prepare for and that is going to either strengthen our bonds, or tear us apart." Radomus admitted, covering his eyes with his top hat. "And that is something I don't want to happen."
"I'm not going to let anything tear us apart." I assured and Alice nodded.
"Yah, I highly doubt anything will be big enough to do that!" Alice added proudly. "Were friends, and it's going to take more than a little something."
Radomus smiled weekly, for a moment before it quickly faded back into full sorrow. It was clear that he was having trouble beveling that we would not be hurt. A dark shadow was hanging over his heart, consuming his being with every moment.
"We should train some more, get a few more levels. Then we can challenge Julia again." I suggested, deciding to change the subject in hopes to lighten the mood. "Then Alice can have a go at it. See if she can beat Julia any easier."
"I agree. I think training then challenging Julia would be the best option at the moment. Sorry about dampening the mood, it's just. I really am worried that something might happen." Radomus nodded standing as Joy walked up. "I'll meet you both back in the training room."
"You're Pokemon are both healed. However I have some unfortunate news about your Espurr." Joy bowed her head leading me and Alice to a back room. On one of the tables lay Spy, left arm completely missing. "It was too severely damaged by the bites. It had to be removed."
"It's fine, she can still battle right?" I asked bowing my head in shame. Alice let out a strained gasp.
"Of course. She's feeling much better already and I think she would be mad if she wasn't allowed to battle. Just be very careful with her." Joy smiled opening the door, allowing me t enter the room.
"Hey Spy. I'm really sorry about your arm. I should have been more careful." I sighed kneeling beside her. "You think you can forgive me?"
"Purr?" Spy asked tilting her head. "Espurr Pur."
"Were going to head back to train some more, are you going to join us?"
"Espurr!" Spy cheered with a nod smiling as I returned her to her ball. Collecting the rest off my team I headed out, walking right past Alice to the training room. A small twinge of guilt entered my heart when Radomus quietly muttered something that sounded like an "Oh no."
"Decibel?" Julia called quietly, tilting her head lightly walking up. "Look I'm sorry about what happened with Spy, it was an accident."
"I know Alice, I just need some alone time with Spy. I don't blame you at all. I blame myself for mot being any more careful." I nodded, closing my eyes. "It's not safe to throw caution into the wind, that's why I'm going to train and beat Julia."
"Alright Decibel, but if you want any help, I'm here for you." Alice responded letting out a small sigh. "Don't let this get to you too much alright?"
Nodding I turned back to my training, sending Bucky, Fang, Nightshade and Stan to get some levels as well.
"Decibel. Look we need to talk. I really don't know all that much about you. I mean yes we are close but we should know a bit more about it then this." Alice suggested walking up. "I never chose to become the champion, my mom told me to."
I paused turning to Alice. She was small but defiant. It was hard to think that her mother forced her.
" So you only.plan on collecting badges so that your Pokemon obey?" I asked with a small sigh. "So you can help clean the city up right?"
"Yah. That's all I want to do. Help people."
"I joined team Aqua as an escape. My name isn't Decibel Smith. It's Decibel Darkshield." I sighed keeping an eye on Nightshade. "I'm betrothed to a man that I don't love. Archie promised to free me, reminded me that I had a choice."
"I'm gay." Alice admitted with a small blush. "My parents don't know yet and I don't plan on telling them anytime soon."
"I did identify as transgender for the longest time. I never went thru with anything because I wasn't confidant enough." I shrugged turning back to my training. Letting out a small sigh I returned my pokemon and walked ovrt yo were Radomus stood.
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Ok, I just learned that Randomus' name is actually Radomus there s no N. I looked it up and it looks like others remember it he same. What?
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1 hour ago, HellBoyOnEarth said:
Thanks mate!
Good to hear some feedbacks!!!
I will look to your run!!
Short info: Part 30 will be splitted into 2 Parts!! You will see why!
Can't wait. I'm still working on the earlier parts due to the fact its inspiring me to do mine even more 😁. So I won't see untill.much later 😁
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I went to the bridge (were the lands at normal is) but it was a panpour. It's been a while since I played so I didnt mind at the time too much. But I'm never going to use it. So can I request a pansear or (2nd) A pansage
Or if its possible a lvl 10 (curent level of the pokemon) shiny ralts
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This is amazing so far.
SpoilerA link to my run if anyone is interested
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Had this one started already but Just finished it
I rally hope this is good.
It wasn't long befor me an Decibel were standing outside Julia's gym, which was located in an old electronics storage and pyrotechnics containment facility.
"You ready Dec?" I asked turning to them smiling brightly. Decibel didn't move, merely staring at the sky. "What are you looking at?"
"I-It's nothing. I just thought I saw something in the clouds." Decibel sighed, clearly uncertain. "Let's just head in before either of us get sick."
"Alright Dec." I nodded walking in with a smile, pausing as A hologram of Ame appeared in front of us.
"Hey Alice, Decibel. You made it to Julia's gym? Good job!" Ame smiled with a light chuckle. "I hop you two are prepared for Julia's electric terrain, it can be a bit of a bitch if not taken care of."
"Thank you for the advice Ame." I smiled as the hologram disappeared, looking around the room. "It looks like were going to have to blow the doors up."
Decibel nodded walking ahead finding a Voltorb and leading it to the door. Once they reached it, the Voltorb exploded blowing a hole in the door. Continuing along we took out four doors before reaching Julia's room.
"Hihi Decibel, you here for your battle?" Julia asked with a bright smile. "Then welcome to the Supper- Duper Ultra-Hyper Electro-Hyper Dazzel- Happy Boom Time House of Cheer"
"The what?" Decibel asked raising her eyebrow in confusion. "No matter, let's start the battle."
"Alrighty! Let's do this go Min-Min!" Julia called sending out her Minun.
"Bucky, your up first!" Decibel nodded, sending him out. "Bucky use headbutt!"
"Min-Min Charge beam!" Julia called. Charge beam was fast and strong, almost taking Bucky out, however Bucky was able to hit with Headbutt, but didn't do near as much damage.
"It's the field, it's powering her attacks! Bucky let's see if you can hit a second Headbutt!" Decibel called as Julia let out a small chuckle
"Not happening Decie! Charge Beam!" Min-Min was faster, and the attack hit, knocking Bucky out.
"Return Bucky, Stan! Poison Gas! She's raising her special Attack, but let's see if she can handle poison." Decibel called sending her out, smirking ever so slightly.
"Min-Min end this, Charge beam!" Again she was faster, hitting Stan hard, a critical hit. Stan fainted.
"Not bad Julia, but I'm not willing to give up. Fang your up next! Take out this pesky Minun!" Decibel called returning Stan.
"Charge Beam Min-Min!" Julia called, gasping as Fang jumped over it, landing on Min-Min with a bite. "Try again Min-Min!"
"Fang keep it up!"
Decibel sighed as Julia shot a small potion dart at Min-Min, luckily Fan kept his hold, causing more damage with his Bite.
"Ko him Min-Min!" Julia cheered as Min-Min shook Fang off and shot a charge beam at him. The attack was powerful easily knocking him out.
"Alright, King let's do this. Leaf Tornadio!" Decibel called switching to her newly evolved Survine, the attack just about knocking Min-Min out.
"Encor!" Julia called and Decibel shook there head as King attacked a second time. Sadly, Kind missed due to Min-Min's quick attack, twice. The third time King managed to out speed it and Knock it out.
"Volty go!" Julia called switching to a Voltorb.
"King keep it up!" Decibel called, pointing dramatically. King was fast, almost knocking Volty out with a single Leaf Tornado, before managing to dodge a sonic boom. Julia again used a potion dart much to Decibel's disappointment.
"Vine whip!" They called, wincing as the Voltorb exploded on contact. "Aftermath."
"Pompom!" Julia called switching again, this time to an Oricoro.
"Vine whip again King!" Decibel called taking a deep breath.
"Knock out the pesky snake, Air cutter!" Julia called, the attack almost knocking King out.
"Leaf Tornaido!" Decibel nodded hissing as the attack missed and a second Air cutter knocked King out. "Spy, I'm leaving this up to you!"
Spy was almost knocked out by an Air cutter but did manage to hit with a confusion, a second air cutter took out Spy.
"Lieutenant your the only one left. Let's see if you can do this!" Decibel called switching out nervously. It was clear from there body language, they knew they were defeated. A single Air cutter taking out Lieutenant.
"Hey, you tried your best. Why don't you go train a bit, then challenge me again tomorrow!" Julia called and Decibel nodded, returning Lieutenant with a quiet apology. "I'll see you both tomorrow."
Leaving the gym I slowly turned to Decibel who gently shook her head. "There is a man with a garden full of bug types, I think we should go there, perhaps get another teammate."
"Alright Decibel, but Poke center first." I suggested leading the way. "You did really good Decibel."
"Thanks Alice. That's amazing coming from you. I think there might be Spineracs in the garden so I think I might catch one of those, then switch with Lieutenant. In the alleyway there were Poochiana, so one of those might help." Decibel nodded handing Joy there team. "I think you should catch one."
"Agreed, I think a Poochiana will help my team out a lot." I smiled as Joy healed there team before handing it back to Decibel.
After leaving we reached the garden, entering it, Decibel quickly gasped.
"Decibel?" I asked turning to them. Frezing my eyes widened. It was a Spinerac, but it wasn't green, yellow red and blue. It was red and black, sparking ever so slightly.
"It's shiny Alice. I'm going to call it, Nightshade." They smiled proudly, quickly catching it. Not long after I ran into a silver and blue Beedrill I named Ice. Leaving the garden, we entered the first alleyway. As Decibel trained I started my search for a Poochiana, after a bit I caught one naming it Pooch.SpoilerDecibel- Nightshade
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In rotation- Psy
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Alice- Shell
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*, Killi 
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In rotation- Zuzu
, Minny
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And there you have it, the last completed chapter (as of right now) Of Reborn-An (Extremely) Batman Inspired Run
It wasn't long befor we reached the Factory, walking up to the agitated green haired boy.
"So they meant the other factory! Fuck those two kneed to learn...." The boy snarled before turning to me, and if it isn't the Fox kid. Look what do you want?"
"We just came to help. We don't want any trouble." Alice said,raising a hand in defense. "What's your name?"
"Fern, and I'm the King bee, top bog cool cat Boss got it?" Fern scoffed smirking, sending a small chill down my spine. "No, well then I'll teach you your place."
"Team you know what to do!" I hissed as he sent out a Budew, Rowlett and Sandile. Quickly I turned my attention to the boy, ducking under a well planed punch, sweeping his feet with a swift kick.
"Bubble go on ahead, I'll meet you at the other factory. Go." I hissed, gasping as Fern grabbed my leg, yanking me to the ground as well, climbing onto my back. Growling, I grounded my foot and arched my back, quickly rolling tossing him to the ground. Hissing I grabbed his wrists and drooped into a hold.
"Are we going to have a problem? Because we don't have to have a problem." I asked holding him in place, hissing as Fern quickly sat aiming a headbutt only for a loud metalic clang to ring out. "That wasn't too clever."
I growled as Fern swung his knee into my groin, using this as leverage to flip us over and grab my throat. Acting quickly I slipped mu thumbs under there hands and shoved, keeping hold of his right and flipping over, punching him hard in the nose with a crack. This drew a snarl from him, but seemed to relax him a bit as he stopped struggling.
"Are we done here?" I asked hissing quietly, holding him still.
"Yah, just let me up." Fern growled looking over as Stan took his Rowlett down. "I'll bring you to the other factory. I think you broke my nose."
"Alright, but I don't want any more trouble alright?" I hissed shifting off holding out my hand for him.
"No promises." Fern snarled pulling himself up, walking off quickly. Luckily I was able to keep up with him as we reached the factory.
"Hey Fox, this is Julia. She says that she's going to help." Alice smiled walking up to us. "I'm not going to ask."
"Good, I don't like either of you." Fern snarled walking up to Julia. "You got in my way, and broke my nose."
"Do we have a way in?" Alice asked and I nodded.
"Explosives!" Me and Julia jinxed, clearly both excited. Quickly we got to work setting up a fair amount of explosives walking back to the group before setting them off.
"Explosion detected. Julia's presence confirmed." A girl reported walking up calmly.
"Florina hey!" Julia called and I shook my head. "We were roommates back in school."
"Time wasts. We should move on." Florina stated and I nodded.
"Agreed, we should clear the factory of all Meteor goons. Previous encounter concludes this." I said in the same monotone as Florina was using.
"Heh, you sound like Flowbot." Fern chuckled lightly as Julia sighed.
"Don't call her that." She groaned, leading the way into the way into the factory.
"I think it's kind of cute." I smiled gently leaning against Florina. "Flobot the Woebot~."
"Pick up line success sixty three percent. " Florina reported, a small smirk reaching her lips for a mere moment.
"This place stinks!" Alice hissed as we walked in gagging lightly as we walked in.
"Smells vaguely like rum or something." I reported, "Definitely polluted, over ninety present"
"Corection: Smell is more like wine to rum." Flobot reported a detectable hint of venom in her voice. "Effect: Dead lake."
"We split up. Bubble you are with me." I nodded turning to leave.
"Hey I'm coming with you!" Fern hissed running up. "I'm not staying with Flobot and Julia."
"Look the way I say it is personal. I know what it feels like to shut down and close up. To be called a robot or cyborg because I am unable to express myself." I hissed turning on Fern. "The way you say it is you are being a bully and a jerk. So unless you have had a mental shut down, stop calling her that."
"Whatever. Look we don't agree, let's just move on!" Fern hissed with a light glare.
"I'll keep lookout." Alice said slowly baking up and heading to the main room. Nodding I lead Fern into the next room, working with him to take out the goons.
"Hey there's a computer here, I'm going to try and hack it." I said walking up to the computer. It wansn't long before the screen turned black.
"Is that good Foxy?" Fern asked huffing.
"Yah it is Fern, just keep going." I sighed shaking my head at the darkness between us. "Let's go."
Both of us shot each other a look but continued walking taking on a few more grunts. Marching on I deactivated a second lock, keeping an eye on Fern as we walked on, smiling as we walked up to Julia and Florinia.
"Meteor headquarters confirmed beyond this gate." Florinia reported nodding at the large door.
"Hey Flo, you think we can hack the main computer?" I asked as she nodded.
"Affirmative." Florinia responded leading me to the small screen.
"Well I'm going to get explosives!" Julia called running off.
"Alright flow, it appears to be a seven digit cript code." I reported, tapping the screen. "If I can patch..."
"It would appear you initiated some sort of security chess." Florinia said sighing as I failed. "You are not very good at this. I will keep guard with Fern, you get in." Nodding I continued working, slowly realizing just how bad at chess I really was.
"Bad news Flo, I suck." I called sending my team to help fend off the swarm of goons.
"I can tell!" Fern called back clearly angry. "Switch with Flobot and take over the battling!"
"Negative. success rate of your plan if five percent. Rate of our current plan is twenty." Florinia concluded as I continued to work.
"Hey you're Snivy evolved!" Fern called and nodded, a tone of distaste in his voice.
"Good I think I have it this time!" I called back quickly continuing the 'game'.
"Hey I get the explosives!" Julia called and Fern groaned. "I'm gong to set up!"
"Were in!" I called as the door slid open smirking as Julia let out a small whine.
"Hey are you the one who's in charge of this place?" Julia demanded as we walked in.
"How kind of you to notice. " A man with a red eyepiece responded smirking lightly, despite his serious tone. "And if it isn't the resident super hero. Were is the Bubblewonder Hell Fox? Aster Eclips kill them."
"Son of a bitch!" I hissed as the girl, Eclips rammed a knife into my stomack. "Stop doing that!" I snarled ramming my knee into her forehead,turning my attention to the pokemon. King was easily handling her Rockruff with Leaf Tornado.
"Mind helping Fern?" I called as Alister sent out a Rockruff of his own, which used fire fang and nearly killed his Budew, knocking it out with a normal bite. Fern huffed returning his pokemon lunging at Aster.
"Thank you!" I called as the remaining Rockruff aimed a firefang at King. Surprisingly Fern's Roulett flew in the way, taking it out with Leafage ad King attacked the first with Leaf Tornado. Aster snarled shooting a dart at the remaining Rockruff, only to be kocked out by Fern, the pokemon by a Leafage and Vinewhip.
Returning King I was surprised to see a Cradly and an Electrode facing off against a Surviper.
"So you managed to defeat my best grunts? I'm not sure if I'm impressed with you or disappointed in them." The man sighed darkly as Alice ran in.
"I heard a commotion and came as fast as I could!" Alice called turning to me and sighing. "You got something. Just. Again?"
"Yah, again." I sighed pulling out the knife and tossing it to the ground, befor turning my attention to the odd man.
"Well that was amusing, however I know I cannot take on five of you at once." He said, voice suddenly ice cold, holding true anger and hate.. "But don't think you have one yet. The battle is only beginning. Team Meteor dose not forgive." With that he diapered along with the two grunts.
"He disappeared!" Julia gasped and for the first time, me and Fern completely agreed on something.
"No shit Sherlock!" We both groaned, quickly turning to each other in slight confusion.
"One time thing Foxxy, don't get comfortable with it." Fern snarled and I nodded.
"You should all rung now." Julia calmy said turning with a big smile.
"Oh shit." Fern hissed turning tail and running. Florinia, Alice and I were not far behind. It wasn't long after we exited the building, that it exploded.
"I like blowing down doors not buildings!" I hissed as Julia ran up. "That was a bit much considering there were unconscious grunts in the halls!"
"Obsidia requires further investigation. I will be in touch Julia..." Florinia turned to me, a knowing look in her eyes. "Hell Fox."
"Alright!" Julia called turning to me. "All the leaders that are registered with badges know of your identity, well as far as I know. It might just be the ones he trusts. Anyways, you two should try and take on my gym. Its a six on six pokemon only battle. No fighting aloud unless attacked."
"I think that would be a great idea Fox." Alice said and I nodded. "But perhaps without the get up, and with you bandaged up."
"Agreed, Julia I look forward to battling you." I reported smiling, walking towards the pick up point.
SpoilerDecibel- King
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Alice chapter, woo
When we arrived I was shocked by what I saw. Two people in black suits, harassing a woman with a Igglibuff.
"Step away from the lady." Decible ordered walking towards the two. "And no motto please I don't really give two fucks who you are. All I care is that you are muggers."
"Is that right Hell Fox. We were expecting you." The girl said sending out Duskul.
"And we brought you some friends." The man added calling out a Cuebone.
"Alright, I can handle the Cuebone, you get the Duskul." Decibel ordered sending King out, who quickly used Vine whip. Nodding I sent Zuzu out going for the Duskull. Spy was doing her best to help, by soothing the Igglybuff.
After a long battle The two pokemon fainted, and Decibel marched up to the girl. "Look, I don't want any trouble alright. I was just..." She started as Decibel garbed her by the collar.
"Look we just want to know who ordered this hit." I said, knocking the man out when he charged at me. "So please tell us who you work for."
"It was a side job, liberate a few pokemon that's all I know. The others were supposed to meet at the old factory. Please I'm begging you let..." The girl responded only to be knocked out by a swift elbow the the forehead.
"I suppose we should check out the factory then." I suggested as Gossip garbed the two thugs, walking out the door after Decibel.
"Iggy Iggy-ig!" Pausing I turned watching as the small Igglybuff walked up to Decibel holding a Pokeball in its small arms.
"Please, will one of you look after my Igglybuff, I don't know what I would do if something happened to it." The woman called following her pokemon.
"I think you should Bubblewonder, I think it would suit you. It's name is Pop, and it's adorable." Decibel reported and I nodded accepting the ball. "Now let's head out and find the factory."
Letting out a small sigh I followed Decibel, quietly watching as they walked, a clear confidence in there step.
"Hey, it's the Fox!" A man yelled charging us. Glaring I elbowed him in the back of the neck causing him to quickly fall.
"Careful when aiming for the neck Wonder, that could do some real damage." Randomus called over the comm and I sighed as Bucky took on the mans Slandit with a sand attack before switching with Lieutenant who took it to low health with gust, fainting to a burn, as Fang delivered the final bite. Sadly he was poisoned on contact.
"Wonder, stand alone mart. This is not a small ward. It's huge." Decibel sighed giving Fang an antidote, hissing as a second man jumped them, swiftly kneeing the man in the stomach. "Bitch." They hissed kicking out, launching the man back but lodging a knife in her leg.
"Rat, take care of the Surskit! Fox, don't move." I hissed running up to them examining the wound.
"It's not too deep, It's stuck in the padding. But It jabbed pretty good. King behind you!" Decibel hissed as second goon ran up sending out a Spinerack and a Cutifly. Bucky and Spy charged the Spinerack, Spy falling to an infestation, Bucky tanking it out. Nodding I worked on removing the blade from Decibel's leg, carfully pulling it out and tossing it aside. Then I quickly wrapped her leg and started healing our teams.
"I think we are definitely close, looks like there is someone over there." I nodded pointing towards the factory. "You good to walk?"
"Yah, I'll be fine for now. It doesn't hurt too bad." Decibel nodded slowly getting to there feet, returning everyone to there balls.SpoilerDecibel- King
, Lieutenant, Stan , Fang , Bucky , Spy(In rotation)- Raid
, PsyAlice- Shell
, Rat, Minny
, Zuzu, Filli, Pop -
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Only two more completed chapters left before I must continue playing
Reborn really dosn't have the best mental health support, but they try.
It was dark and cold. Sitting up I let out a small groan as I noticed Ame, standing over me with a somewhat disappointed look in her eyes.
"Randomus, can't you see what you have done?" Ame hissed glaring darkly as I rolled my eyes. "You tried to kill yourself. Why on earth did you think that was the way out of everything?"
Chuckling I shook my head. The one language she knew only I understood. Well basically only me, it was the language of the wilds after all. "Ame I know exactly what I did. I know it was an attempt.However I was not superposed to survive, Decibel saving me was a hitch in my plan."
“Just a hitch? Randomus they saved youre life! ” Ame hissed back gently biting her lip tearing up. "Look I get it, your sick. But that's not the way we deal with this. You need help."
"I am not sick There is nothing wrong with me. Call whatever therapist you want and I will talk to them!" I hissed back letting out a small sigh. "However I will train them, I owe those two that much at least."
"Thank you Randomus, for seeing it my way." Ame smiled weakly as Decibel and Alice walked in. "You three should start training Julia is gathering people to storm the factories."
"Of course we will also be training for your gym badge against Julia so show me your teams." I nodded, voice still a bit dark. I sighed lightly at the teams. Alice had Shell (Squirtle level eleven), Rat (Ratatta level nine), Minny (Snubble level six), Filli (Wurmple level four), and Zuzu (Zubat level five). Decibel has King (Snivy level twelve), Stan (Stunky level nine), Psy (Caterpie level five), Fang (Patrat level ten), Lieutenant (Pidgey level eleven), and Bucky (Zigzagoon level five). Both teams needed extensive training.
"Alright, follow me." I sighed nodding as I walked out of the room, leading the two into a large training room were we were greeted by Tyson.
"Gossip said you guys were training, mind if I join you?" He asked leting out a small sight. "Could use a bit of training myself if we are going to take on Giovi."
"Can I see your team?" I asked tilting my head in curiosity. "Just put them on there and their information will pop up on the screen. Nodding Tyson smiled, placing the balls on the scanner. This time I was a little impressed Prince ( Greninja level seventy six ), Youki (Mimikyu level sixty three), Six (Umbreon level fifty six), Steven ( Metagross level eighty), Queen (Slacking level seventy nine) Punna (Lupunny level level seventy three).
"Impressive kid, I suppose being champion level with an outside team helps with the level cap?" I teased lightly as he rolled his eyes. "Come on you can train with us."
"Thanks, so were are you going to start?" Tyson asked and I shrugged. "I mean this place is huge."
"Whatever you would like it's up to you." I chucked watching as Decibel and Alice searching, sending there teams out to spar.
"Or perhaps we can talk. Just you and me. You are fighting the madness aren't you? I recognize it anywhere." Tyson whispered turning to me. "All the Wildones I have met have a very similar madness. Perhaps that is why you took interest in Decibel and Alice. You think you can stop it from getting them but that's not how it works."
"And it's why you are lying to their face. You are not who you say you are are you?" I asked quietly pulling him to the side. "I have a feeling you are just a really good fake."
"I am who I say I am. I'm just not who they think." Tyson sighed shaking his head. "I haven't been for a long time."
"I don't trust you." I hissed as Decibel ran up smiling.
"Randomus, is there a PC around here. I don't think Psy is cut out for this, but I caught some pokemon during the ambush. Well more they caught themselves after the.. Anyways I want to see if any of them are a little stronger." Decibel smiled, streaching there arms. "See if I should change a few people up."
"Alright, follow me." I smiled leading her to the machine smiling as she swapped Psy for a Espurr named Spy. "Nice, but isn't she a lower level?"
"Yes but I feel like I can work with her a little better than I can with Psy." Decibel shrugged running off to train again. "You coming Randomus?"
"Yah, alright." I nodded walking up with a smirk.
"Sir, we have report of two Meteor thugs." Gossip reported appearing next to me. "How do you want to handle it?
"Let me go. I can take care of them." Decibel suggested, walking up in suit. "It'll be good field training."
"Agreed, Gossip take Decibel and Alice to the scene." I ordered as Alice walked up. "Let's see how well they can work together."
SpoilerDecibel- King
, Lieutenant, Stan , Fang , Bucky , Spy(In rotation)- Raid
, PsyAlice- Shell
, Rat, Minny , Zuzu, Filli
V13 - Savefile troubleshooting
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I etited some sprites aGame - Renee - 47 - 150h 36m - 3 badges - Lapis Pokemon Center.rxdata while back and everything was working fine untill today. I beat SGame.datSharedPC.rxdataGame.rxdataerrorlog.txthelly and now every time I get into a battle it crashes. the last two are just incase they would help
EDIT: I undownloaded everything but the save files and redownloaded the game and it appears to be running just fine. I think that happened was that when I ran my computer cleaner something from the game might have gotten swept up by that and deleted erroneously.