MightySceptile
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Just now, Savo said:
Aye, I have to say they did handle Shelly pretty well... well, most of them anyways. Currently, I'm torn between them continuing the nuzlocke and failing it.
Though I am curious about everyone's thoughts on a rather important subject... what voices do you think they'll give to Shade, Kiki, and Cal?
I feel like Shade is going to get an over-exaggerated demon voice or the complete opposite
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Oh right, uh if you look at the cover you'll see another pokemon there. Well you see another reason why I was taking awhile was because I had another character in mind and wasn't sure if I should add them or not. Because of the recent events in Episode 17 I think this character could fit into the story nicely. This character will appear in chapter 2 or 3 depending on the length on chapter 2. I really want to put a brief description of them now, but I wanna keep them a secret for now.
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Ok I re-did the first chapter, sorry it took so long. Trying to find time between summer classes, free time, and this was kinda hard. Luckily I only have six more classes to go to. Thanks for all the helpful suggestions, hopefully I managed to make the story a little better, now I can start on chapter 2.
https://www.wattpad.com/586567817-pokemon-reborn-grand-quest-chapter-1-all-aboard
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49 minutes ago, nepeta100 said:
I see Twit just got spoiled for at least two pulse mons it seems XD
At least Twit accepted his fate
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49 minutes ago, MightySceptile said:
Okay thank you I'll definitely try that in my next chapter. Oh and when you mean description do you mean describing the scenery or the characters or both?
Actually you know what after thinking it over I'm just gonna re-do the first chapter and fix it the issues. Since I'm only on Chapter 2 and there's no real rush anyway. Plus I plan on making it a bit longer too while I'm at it.
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8 minutes ago, Arys said:
I think you lack description in everything. Describe the train, is it moving fast or crowded or describe their surrounding. Describe their tones when they talks. Are they talk angrily, shouting, etc. Sometimes you want to describe gesture so we can get a bit of their personality. And possibly all in paragraph format, but don't crammed all dialogues in paragraph. If different people talking, it's better to put them in different paragraph.
Ok that's for the advice. Also do you, or anyone, think this chapter was too short, after reading it again it felt a little too short, but I was afraid of making it too long. The originally plan was to have the first chapter be the train crash, walking to the Grand Hall, getting a quick look at Reborn, getting their starters, meeting and battling Victoria and Cain
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8 minutes ago, Dex said:
It needs more description, more basically everything besides dialogue. It's more like a script than an actual story at this point. I do like the idea of fleshing out the protagonist choices and having more than one involved in the events of the game.
Okay thank you I'll definitely try that in my next chapter. Oh and when you mean description do you mean describing the scenery or the characters or both?
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Not gonna lie Nappy and Twit are doing a lot better than I thought. Twit hasn't whited out yet and he beat Julia on his first try and Nappy still has starter.
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Ugh, I really want to use a Noibat in this story, but I really don't want to train one up, I remember the torment I went through using one in my first run of Reborn and I don't want to go through that ever again.
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Okay I finally finished the first chapter of my fanfic, I posted it on Wattpad, I wasn't sure if I should post there, here, or both. But you tell me your thoughts on it though
https://www.wattpad.com/586567817-pokemon-reborn-journey-of-miles-melody-willow
Edit: Oh yeah, I'm still working on a better title of the story, so it might be different than what the link says
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5 minutes ago, Abyssreaper99 said:
It's under the et al. section named creative works. This is still relevant to reborn but any other fanfics you have just post in the Creative Works section
Oh ok, thank you
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1 hour ago, iDunno said:
Cool, their bios remind me of the Pokemon Special/Adventures manga. What would be their teams?
Thanks that's what I was going for and for their teams, I'm actually playing through Reborn again as these characters to make their teams as accurate and realistic as possible. But for their starters Miles would get Chimchar, Melody would get Snivy, and Willow gets Froakie.
2 hours ago, Trufa said:Well he could just have got the guts to start training, could be 60 years old if you like haha But I mean, you can start being a trainer at age 10, but being at international police at 19 (here in my country people start working by law at 18 aside being a trainee) so he would have one year of experience and is already working internationaly. Maybe you could elaborate more, like, he was skyrocket skilled and his father (or someone) get the job to him and that's his first work outside, I don't know. Hope you get my point
@Dex I don't know, maybe haha
Thanks I'll take that into consideration
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14 hours ago, Abyssreaper99 said:
Seems decent from what I can tell. Shouldn't this be in the creative writing section though?
Oh I didn't know about that, where's the creative writing section?
15 hours ago, Candy said:It's pretty neat
It's always nice to see peepos getting inspired by this beautiful game~
One question in the set up tho, how are Miles and Melody childhood frens if they were born and raised in different regions/cities?
My thought process was that they met up at a summer camp in Undella Town and kept in touch ever since, but yeah I'm starting to think it'd be easier to say that Melody was born in Unova, but moved to Sinnoh when she was younger.
13 hours ago, Trufa said:I had the same thought as @Candy, also can a 19 years old person be member of the international police posing as a rookie trainer? I know they start at age 10 but I think that is a bit too much haha. just wondering. Go for it, I hope to see a good history.
Well actually I originally was gonna make him 21, but I thought it was too old. Also I didn't know if people would buy a 21 year old as a rookie trainer
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So I'm trying to write a Pokemon Reborn fanfic. Yes, I know I'm not a very funny person, but that's beside the point, I'm gonna try and write one. It'll basically be the same story as a Pokemon Reborn, just played through the eyes of three different characters. The story is that Miles and Melody see the advertisement for the Reborn League and decide to challenge it. As for Willow, he is a member of the International Police posing as a trainer to take down Team Meteor.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Pokemon and I don't own Pokemon Reborn or any of the trainer sprites, I'm just using them for my OC's.
Miles Whyte- An 18 year old, rookie trainer born and raised in Sunyshore City from the Sinnoh Region. Miles is a passionate and hot-headed trainer, who seeks adventure and a challenge. So he decided to take the Reborn league, with his close and childhood friend Melody.
Melody Blake- An 18 year old, rookie trainer born in the Unova Region, but moved to Sunyshore City at a young age and was raised there. Melody is a kind and level-headed trainer, who wants to explore and see the world. So she decided to go to the Reborn league, with her close and childhood friend Miles.
Willow Knight- A 20 year old, member of the International Police, posing as a rookie trainer to investigate Team Meteor and PULSE (btw Willow Knight isn't his real name). Willow is a cool-headed and mysterious trainer working to take down Team Meteor. So he poses a trainer taking part in the Reborn League to get closer to Team Meteor.
If anyone has any suggestions so far I'd be glad to hear them, but don't expect too much from me.
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18 minutes ago, Sayia said:
Ok thank you
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I'm stuck at the Chamber of Awakenings and I accidentally saved my game file
Edit: I was playing on the randomizer of this game so the pokemon I have are very different from the pokemon you should have at that point in the game
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For the trial captain I chose Mallow because my favorite type is grass and really like Totem Lurantis the most. My favorite kahuna is Olivia because of obvious reasons and surprisingly, despite her typing, she gave me the hardest time out of all the kahunas
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YAAAAAAASSSSS!!!!!
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How come you don't put murkrow on the team for fighting type coverage I know you have a grimer but it could still help
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A Nihilego, Venusaur, Genesect, Mega Metagross and Mega Gengar huh... do you not like to have fun, like that sounds awful
Btw I agree I would rather run an offensive team that overpowers my opponent quickly and teras down their team than stalling them out with a defensive that's just not fun at all for me or my opponent.
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I regret choosing squirtle as my starter, blastoise sucks it's bulky but slow and barely does any damage
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43 minutes ago, Damien said:
Okay I need help confirming this does EVERY gym leader have Z-moves?! Venam and Keta have em' but I need to know about the others,please tell me.
In Normal Mode or Intense Mode
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9 minutes ago, Spark Dynamo said:
Goldenwood Cave is the first place, and yes. It's a straightforward day/night evo.
Thanks
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Does anyone know how to get a rockruff and if I evolve during the day will it be in its midday form
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I feel like I can't blame them too much for getting bodied like this since they got so many crits, the biggest reason why nappy and mo lost was because of crits