Yeah. I was aiming for the first. I guess my wording kinda threw it off.
I'll take your suggestion. It actually goes really well with the whole observational skills portion of her character.
Rereading each of the lines now, I am actually surprised how well she fits into the Laylite line. I'm actually gonna change that then.
Don't worry about seeming like you're nitpicking. I appreciate the criticism.
Here's the thing. I'm gonna defend myself on that point a bit. I, at a certain point in my life, suffered from an inferiority complex. As a result, I was both highly critical but at the same time, I paid a lot of attention to the people around me. Perhaps the observational skills were originally a part of me before then but I know that during that phase in my life that I used them a hell of a lot more in my daily life than I do nowadays. So, I guess that is also an issue with wording. Observational skills being caused by the inferiority complex was probably not the right thing to say. That being said, I did want observational skills and overuse of them to be a part of Sion's character.
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So, here's my revised profile.
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Forum Name: Hiss13
Character Name: Sion Sanctis
Age: 15--August 13th, 1024
Personality: She's a fairly snarky girl who uses that facade to mask an inferiority complex she harbors. As a result, she does tend to push people away from her leaving her quite lonely and awkward. As a result of her inferiority complex, she has developed a tendency to be heavily critical and overuse her observational skills. Despite that, she is kind-hearted to the point where her words betray her actions many times. She is the type who dislikes arguments. However, her temper is very easily triggered leading to her inadvertently pushing people further away.
Appearance: She stands at 5'6" and has a fairly slender figure concealed under a variety of black and white lolita dresses. She sports long black hair that reaches to above her waist and blue eyes.
Line of Belief: Laylite
Modifier: Pulse