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Heyo, Hukuna Sensei here. Welcome to the Forlorn Shadow's Den! This is a place for me to write things on my mind in more more expressive fashion. It is sort of a online stress ball for me. I figure some of you may wish to see this work and I might as well share it with people if I am going to do it. While I will be providing a Feedback/Discussion Thread for you guys to discuss the works written here, I will not be utilizing any of that feedback within these exercises. That is not the point of this thread and it never will be. This is not for my improvement and it is certainly not going to be -
Longing burns my veins, aching wracks my bones; telling me to leave it all and touch the sky. A fire’s in my heart, void's replaced my soul; I crave the things I cannot find. I’ve gathered too much moss! Chains of ivy hold me down, but my desire burns through even time! So long, Mother! So long, Sister! The time has come for me to learn to fly.
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This will be the place to discuss the works within my thread the Forlorn's Shadow's Den. Feel free to offer criticism and feedback as well, but be forewarned that I will not be using it fro the works within the thread. These observations will be useful to me in the future however, so please put them below if you see anything I can improve on. Link to Thread:
