[E17] Minor Errors

[Shadowslash 4]

I couldn't post an image, but during a double battle if you revive a pokemon and you only have one pokemon on the field, it acts like the revived pokemon is on the field and the opponent can target and faint the pokemon before it even touches the field all in one turn.

[keltena 18]

A few more; hopefully I’m not repeating.

 

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Missing space before end tilde (Episode 5 story)

 

“Never mind, but...” (Episode 6 story)

 

“...in a 6 on 6 battle.”

 

“Never mind.” (Episode 7 story)

 

“Whatever it is must be important...”

 

“We will remove the trespassers.”

 

“You’ll get your just deserts later.”

 

“Well, never mind.”

 

“You all, and Kiki, tried to stop it...” or “You all and Kiki tried to stop it...”

 

“Didn’t do half a bad job...”

 

HM is just Machine now, right?

 

“And whose fault do you think that is?” (Episode 8 story)

 

“I may have invested myself in this “Team Meteor”, but...” (missing comma)

 

If Sigmund means he doesn’t feel like having a battle right now, “contest” is the wrong word; the way it’s phrased right now, he’s basically saying he doesn’t feel like objecting to a battle, which is pretty different.

 

Is Noel supposed to face the player while saying this?

 

“Laura has some tics, but she’s a good person.”

 

Minor, but judging by the caps, this is supposed to be using the name of the field, right? If so it should be “Mirror Arena”.

 

“Mother” should be capitalized in these lines

 

“Never mind that.”

 

“Can you and Nomos do a gym battle?” (Episode 9 story)

 

“Surprised to see ya, Sis.”

 

Missing space after dialogue tag

 

“Oh? Never mind, then?” (Move Relearner, Onyx Ward)

 

“Grandmama’s good luck charm”, “Uncle Steve’s good luck charm”, “Auntie Margret’s necklace” (Apophyll Academy)

 

Minor, but all other tombstones in the game (including Kiki’s in the same area) are written with quotes around the text (Byxbysion Wasteland)

 

“Jettisons” doesn’t make sense in this sentence; did you means “juts out from the waste”? (Or “has been jettisoned in the waste”?)

 

Missing space after “MR.”

 

This NPC has a dialogue tag when spoken to her here (and subsequently), but not when you first speak to her. Is there a reason for that? (Spinel Town)

 

These two trainers in Serra’s gym give the same line upon defeat (i.e., on the victory screen) as when spoken to after, which no other trainers do. Is that supposed to happen?

 

“...when a spirited Psychic type fell out of it...” (Hunting, 4 badges)

 

“...but never mind that!” (Hunting, 5 badges)

 

“A rock positively glowing with moss!” (Hunting, 6 badges)

 

“...earns you the right to challenge the famous Elite Four...” (Commercial)

 

“Crime and pollution are at an all-time high in Reborn City.” (Commercial)

 

“A Poké Ball with expired data.” (I’m guessing the item name is a character limit issue?)

 

“Softboiled” is written “Soft-Boiled” as of Gen VI

 

Floral Healing’s description cuts off

 

Trick-or-Treat’s description describes its function in the official games rather than what it does in Reborn. (Same for Forest’s Curse and Ally Switch.)

 

Should probably say “Sandstorm lasts 8 turns” or “Sandstorms last 8 turns”? (Ashen Beach field notes)

 

Like before, field notes otherwise seem to format multipliers as “x1.3” and only use percentages for percentage-based effects (Swamp Field field notes)

 

“The foe Minior’s shields came up!” (The “shields went down” message is correct.)

 

And here’s a couple more general consistency problems. I don’t have screenshots of all the instances right now, but in case it helps:

 

There’s some inconsistency in use of numerals vs. written-out numbers in lines like this. “Single battle” and “double battle” are also inconsistent in whether they’re capitalized. (General grammar rules usually say to write out small numbers in most cases, ftr. For the “single battle”/”double battle” thing, not capitalizing them is more grammatically correct, but I think the official games do capitalize them, though I’d have to check to be sure.)

 

And I don’t have any screenshots of this one, but “PokéMart” and “Pokémart” are both used in various lines. (The official games actually write it “Poké Mart”, two words.)

 

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Episode 8 story

 

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Episode 9 story

 

TV, Profile, 5 badges

 

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The light from these lamps overlaps foreground objects that should block them (Byxbysion Wasteland)

 

This trainer is a Ranger, but doesn’t have the Ranger overworld sprite. Is that intentional? (Chrysolia Forest)

 

The nugget on this pedestal covers the player’s head (Spinel Museum)

 

Sleep Talk uses the Flying TM icon instead of the Normal one

 

 

[CountryReport 0]

I went back over a year in the known bugs section and didn't see this. Hopefully this isn't a known issue.

If you enter the underground railnet from this side and use an escape rope to take you back to the entrance, you are unable to go left underneath opal bridge. Going back into and out of the railnet corrects this issue. I was able to recreate this each time I tried it.

[Sheep 27]

Some minor bugs that I've found so far. Some of them might have been posted already (particularly the E17 content) but I did try to omit any that I saw earlier in the thread.

 

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https://prnt.sc/i2j53c

https://prnt.sc/i2j6rq

https://prnt.sc/i3dqfi

https://prnt.sc/i9i5lw

https://prnt.sc/iplc2d (The sky is shining through a few gaps in the ground here).

https://prnt.sc/isfrk7 (This is like two different lines have been mashed together that each try to say the same thing).

https://prnt.sc/isnb3v (I can't remember what the issue is here but if you can see it great).

https://prnt.sc/i92dor (This was against a Dugtrio that was underground. It didn't apply the penalty but the text still came up).

 

There's also a whole bunch of older screenshots I found on my computer that I don't think I ever uploaded. From the looks of them they date back to the end of 2016 but given the long time frame between updates they may still be relevant.

 

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https://imgur.com/Bcc5w9X (reigns, not rains).

https://imgur.com/Jx8mye9

https://imgur.com/7ZYVhjr

https://imgur.com/VIH23sg (It, not It's).

https://imgur.com/wHOibzZ (Error in the spelling of Honchkrow, also I think it can learn Sucker Punch now).

https://imgur.com/2BXX6Zv (Another misspelling of Honchkrow).

https://imgur.com/4Er4j30 (I used the light shard before talking to him. Makes things a bit awkward).

https://imgur.com/Z2IxQvx

https://imgur.com/AS8G8F3 (I imagine I'm standing on something that I shouldn't be in those last two).

https://imgur.com/TTU8eAs (Mr. Shadow has the space in the wrong place).

https://imgur.com/4ghx1dr (Same as the last one).

https://imgur.com/YONrCvj (This reads weird. This puzzle is also at college level maybe?

https://imgur.com/rJZqmda

 

[Sheep 27]

 

I'd imagine there's supposed to be something in front of can.

 

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There's also a linebreak here. Dunno if anyone else has already reported it.

 

The whole conversation with Cain is odd if I'm honest. He starts referring to Aya as her even though Aya has never come up in the conversation before that point. Dunno if it's intentional because of his dislike of her or unintentional given that I think the dialogue has been edited? Either way it struck me as weird so I thought I'd bring it up.

 

Also also I just fought a Golett and it used the fearsome move Stomp Tantrum. Is that because of a character limit? Or a mistake?

[Dark_Void 0]

Whenever i try to swim here i get stuck swimming on the ground

[Sheep 27]

Linebreak

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[DemICE 230]

These two lines are not clickable for further information in the psychic terrain field notes:

 

 

 

Also i think this additional information text is for the  [Certain stat moves effect UP]   instead of the one i clicked at.

 

 

I'm pretty sure  there should be further information on this line  on Corrosive Field:

 

 

Same in this line for the Snowy Mountain Field

 

[Chaoskoi 0]

So in Beryl ward's cave (the one next to the cemetery and has 3 rocksmash rocks) when I try to enter this happens...

 

 

[pradish 0]

This is in Water Treatment Center. When you surf from the edge in the picture below, you can surf over the land too.

[Stroll 1]

Street light is on in the north part, but off in the south part, there's a zone change between the two areas.

[CrossImpact 107]

proof-reader-chan intermezzo
has nothing to do with proof-reading tho

I just misclicked on F12 and it restarted the game without the window being in focus, nice!

anyway
 

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1-7) entrance graphics are dsvnnrg here and inaccessible tile there and line break here and there
no picture) for the Crystal Cavern field, some moves are listed both for x1,5 and x1,3 damage, Multi Attack and Prismatic Laser
no picture) please streamline El's referee introduction to the gym battle against Radomus (six etc)
8 ) legends say some civilllllians are still hiding today
9) being pumped up with "level ups" instead of "level up"s
10 missing words: supposed to be a place
11) line break (the one with the guy selling you the super rare mighty Pokemon only happens when talking to him again after Corin leaves)
12) typo: embarrassed
13-14) line breaks
15-16) ye olde line break for blowing up these two rocks (want to use blast powder? message)
17) line breaks
18-23) since you said it in fact are two sapphire bracelets which is consistent throughout the rest of the game, adjust grammar to "them" instead of "it".
24) typo: Calcenon City
25) line break
26) struck me as odd, usually you don't let the player see map edges that easily.

27) can walk on this tile
28) lead led led
29) line break
30) typo: a way
31-35) line breaks
no picture) in the WTC, it should be PULSE Read-Out 03 (not Read-out)
no picture) pls streamline announcement for Ciel's battle too
no picture) unnecessary space in the initial paralyzing message : "...is paralyzed!  It may be unable to move!"
no picture) Itemfinder does not show the Rare Candy in E16 Malchous Forest (where egg is before)
36) cemetery gate is walked upon
37) line break
38) in the meantime
39) line break
40) all YES and NO to the daycare lady are caps lock
41) check if adding a space to the item Energy Powder takes up too much space
42) line break
43) typo: satellite. give it one l for the one you took from the civilians.
no picture) when opening the doors in the Power Plant, message says "...used the Yureyu key" - key should be capitalized
44) inaccessible tile
45) typo: unaware
46) Yasuhiro surely doesn't forget 3rd person s but he cost a lot
47) line break
48) typo: embar.. embarrassing.
49) line break
no picture) capitalize Out for the Pulse Read-out 01 in "Devon".

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[DigitalAmber 74]

A single pixel here I see oddly missing... 

left side of the door between the floor rooftop and the building

 

 

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[Alistair 705]

spider-MC strikes again

 

 

and oh my goodnes, a typo!

 

[pyrromanis 70]

Roseli Berry's sprite when planting is a pokeball lol
http://prntscr.com/jda5y4

Edit: This is complete different but I don't want to double post. Tangela is missing Nature Power from its learnset via TM. It can normally learn it through breeding though. Tangrowth can learn Nature Power normally

[sineco 0]

Hello there!

 

I finally got around to downloading the new episode (17.1). Now all texts, be it dialogue or in battles or whatever, have no spaces at all. This makes stuff pretty hard to read

Anything that can be done/that I can do?

 

[CrossImpact 107]

ok, old post got annoying long

E17 stuff goes into here
might actually proof-read depending on how I feel

1) I just never thoughT
2+3) Interview after Adrienn, I screem too upon that error
4) Profiles after Adrienn, one word too much
5) Ferroseed Hunting program, needs a comma: attention, so
6) Minior Hunting program, says Teknite Ridge but the world map says Teknite Range - which is correct?
7) Minior Hunting program, needs a comma: ground, this
8 ) is this Phione or something x), anyway, third hunting program for the episode, needs a comma: before, maybe
9) same program, needs a comma: case, maybe
10) transporation
11) break
12) dash with space
no picture) when entering the Devon store after E16, the game will attempt to play the music from during the story, then overwrite it after like 0,2seconds with the Obsidia tune
13) break
14) in E17 at least, can simply walk through the metal bars (for both Victoria's and Arclight's cage). also, switching the electric floor panels with A doesn't work anymore (...which storywise is understandable)
15) in E17 but before going to the desert for the first time ; man still talks about work to open the desert gate
no picture) when being paralyzed, there are too many spaces in the initial message (...!  It may be unable to move!)
no picture) same for trying to run from trainer battle (No!  ....)
no picture) when an opponent is using the Seed in the Desert Field, the message of self-applying Sand Tomb starts with lower case t (the foe ..... ....)
no picture) when switching in and being hurt by Stealth Rock, consider capitalizing Stealth Rocks (...is hurt by stealth rocks!), would also be necessary for the message of Crystal field
same with Spikes
16) missing comma: in your travels, did
17) missing comma; Lin, it's
18) consider commas; bases, and then ... she is, we end up
19) he never really got over losing his parents... like he did? huh that sentence doesn't make too much sense or what am I missing
20) can just walk through this thing
21) and through this thing, not sure if you can even change
22) pretty sure it's "rat's nest"
23) missing comma "in time, necessity...."
24) consider comma "still refused, even..."
25) missing comma "anyway, ..."
26) line break
27) missing comma "... gym, are you?"
28) missing comma "..looking to stay too, the two of you..."
29) Mirage Tower 4F, could step onto the middle one of the tiles I broke before breaking it
30) consider comma "... Pokemon, she ..."
no pictures) line breaks for blowing up all 3 glowing rocks in Mirage Tower basement
no picture) when jumping down onto Gible in Sugiline, the text reads "The startled pokemon attacked!" - Pokemon should start with capital letter
31) tree on dune can be walked through (seems to be the case for any tree placed like that)
32) missing comma "... for now, let's go..."
33) typo - ability
34) not sure if grammar applies here or in the way I think, butttuuuu "dares to think / dares thinking" sounds way more natural to me
35) would not capitalize bracelets here since it's not the full term for the item
36) no picture ; after Titania, in the Grand Hall - Arclight talks like he freed the daycare couple despite me having done that. (I guess in case player never did that?)
37) missing space - Mr.McKrezzy -> Mr. McKrezzy
38) missing comma: "... somethin' here, but ...."
39) missing comma "...you the fuck up, otherwise..."
40) ye olde missing comma "..., but..."
41) typo: apparently
42) that one is just confusing. is it: "Like, protip, "bros" (referring to all the sailors), nobody is going to be impressed by you catcallin' them!" ??
43) unnecessary space in front of "which" for both vending machines 
44) no picture - bicycle music doesn't stop when riding into sweet co HQ
45) I don't want him to get me back, but it's ok if he's trying to get back at me. are both phrases the same?
46) typo: tomorrow
47) typo let's not joke it's not a typo at this point anymore it's a meme: embarrassing
48) linebreak
49) unnecessary space: muscle-headed

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[Urusius 4]

Hi! So I was trying to breed a Nidoran-M and this happened lol. Is it normal at least?

[Akexus 0]

Black border (missing tiles)

 

 

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[CrossImpact 107]

ok next post

1) Labradorra City
2) missing comma: ... there, so ...
3) missing comma: ... somewhere, but ...
4) missing comma: ... Amy, you...
5) missing comma: ... us, then...

work on your commas in front of "but" and in conditional clauses x)
the latter usually is like

if A, then B (usually comma)
but
B if A (usually no comma)

6) missing comma: ... can, then ...
7) missing comma: ...surface, your...
8 ) missing comma: ...them, but...
9) missing comma: ...stunt, there... (same principle as with conditionals)
10) space behind -

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[pyrromanis 70]

Zygarde's 10% sprite has some white pixels at the top left 

[DigitalAmber 74]

The Linkstone salesman seems to be missing either "Now you" or "You" in his dialogue. 

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[Elvenlore 37]

Purify's move description reads: "The user heals the target's status condition, restoring their own HP is succesful".

 

When Blue Moon Ice Cream is held by a Pokemon the text spills out of the textbox. This happens when viewing the Pokemon's summary or hovering over it in the PC. Perhaps it should be rephrased to 'Moon Ice Cream?

 

Final Gambit's move description reads: "The user sacrifices itself but does damage equal to the its current HP."

 

I'm also sure this has been mentioned but Shiny Dragonite's backsprite has a horizontal white line on the right side when Dragonite is in battle.

[Amethyst 2466]

marker post

also i appreciate you keltena but jesus h christ

 

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I won't bug you with every instance of “type” being capitalized inconsistently (unless you want me to, I guess), but this one seemed worth pointing out because it happens within the same line.

might as well at this point otherwise it'll never be consistent 

[Damashi The Kaotic 5]

Not sure if its been reported already, but about sometime after my 7th GYM badge characters started acting like I was female instead of male. Selected Lucia as my sprite, and male as my gender. I don't have a screen shot of when it started, but I noticed it start after the battle with Noel, though it is possible it happened earlier. It was definitely working right when I rescued Cain from Taka since he refereed to me as his prince.

 

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