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Pokemon Reborn Development Blog
Pokemon Rejuvenation Development Blog
Status Updates posted by Sceptilespy
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Make sure to sign up for Mythos, a league inspired by the original Reborn League, and taking some pointers from the Redemption League! Starts October 26th, but you can sign up after that too!
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Hello person moderating this.
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Ultra Sun and moon sucked.
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SpoilerI didn't like it. I just don't feel that I should've payed 40+ dollars for something that was Sun and Moon with a bit more added. Ultra Warp, Recon squad, and new UBs are cool, but at the end of the day, at max it's like +1 hour of content. +2 if you include the Rainbow Rocket Arc, which was actually REALLY good. But that's about it for me. Overall, the game was just +2 hours of content, and I got bored of it pretty quickly. Game wise it's probably at least a 7/10, but that's expected out of a Pokemon Game. But my personal preferences bring it down to a 4.5/10, and the only reason it's that high is because it's a Pokemon Game.
Not disagreeing with you, but this is my opinion on it. Probably too much for just a status update.
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SpoilerI remember more content (like a proper fairy trial, mantine surfing,...), plus I kinda like the changed story (especially Hau) a bit more so while it isn't 100% new content the changed story does allow for some unexpected surprises which kept the experience interesting. Plus I like replaying games so I don't mind. It's not like pokemon isn't rehashed content anyway.
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So it appears Net neutrality isn't a thing anymore. Rip.
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Not necessarily.
The decision now must be carried through Appeals, which it has been denied at twice in the past.
Congress was introduced to a bill earlier this morning that would deny net neutrality's removal.
The Attorney General of New York currently has plans to lead a multistate lawsuit, which 18 other states have already agreed to be a part of, against the FCC for deciding to remove Net Neutrality.
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And this makes 501 posts on this forum. All I can say is I'm proud to have spent so much time with you fellow Rebornians. I wouldn't trade it for anything except maybe a bag of cheetos because I'm extremely hungry. Jokes aside though, with the release of E17 today. I feel it's appropriate to say thank you, and I look forward to the future we'll spend together.
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Anyone want to battle on reborn? Just respond back with your Username and we can set it up.
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Woo. Versions 1-10 for story have been completely planned, every little detail and punctuation done. Now it's just a matter of getting the hang of RPG Maker which is what makes people scrap their game ideas.
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So I guess we're getting V17 as a Christmas gift just like E16? Jesus. I understand Ame and the dev team are putting in so much effort for us and I appreciate that, but is anyone else getting annoyed of waiting a year for an hour's worth of content? I'm no Game Dev yet so maybe I'm not qualified to talk, but if there's any way I could help speed up the process, I'd like to know.
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EVERY BUG TYPE IS FIGHTING. WHO ARE YOU PLACING YOUR BETS ON. MINE IS ON GOLISOPOD. CAPS LOCK IS ON.
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No offense to anyone who's non binary, but can people please stop pushing non binary characters into stories. It gets really annoying when there are like 5 non binary characters in a story that's not relevant to anything non binary. I don't hate non binary people or anything, but it's obvious when non binary people are there for nothing else other then the fact they're non binary, and it adds nothing to the story. People are forcing LGBT characters into stories for no other reason other then the fact they're LGBT. For instance, there's a side quest in Rejuvenation, that involves a shy boy who gives you a love letter to deliver to another person. Here's the surprise though, the "other person" is a boy. There's nothing inherently wrong with that, but the snarky reply the boy who gave you the letter gives you is just confirming what I'm saying. It's something along the lines of: "I'm a guy. So what?" Here's what's what. This side quest only pushes the fact that their gay in your face. You get nothing out of it. It holds no relevance to the story, and it's not even a fun side quest to do. I won't say them being gay wasn't a surprise, but I won't say it was a good one either. If anything, this only stirs more hate against gays. I'll stop there because now I'm treading into dangerous territory, but please think about this Game devs and writers and what not. Does the character being straight, gay, non binary, a sentient sun, transgender, a black hole, a satellite, or a toilet seat impact the story at all? Does it hold any meaning? If it doesn't, reconsider the character and go from there.
I'd actually like to hear about what people have to say about LGBT characters being forced into fiction and whatnot. They want to be treated normally right? So why force them in?
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Why are electric teams so hard to build?
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The another issue is that Electric types that actually have roles other than "Fast Frail Special Sweeper" are a bit hard to come by. Electric's other sorta role it covers is somewhat, strange bulky slow things.
Basically, they lack a breadth of options due to as mentioned above shallowish movepools, and shallow role diversity. There's tools there it's just there's not a lot to pick through.
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Just, what do you think about all of this? Give me thoughts, anything.
Name: Gang Leader Aiden
Type Gym: Normal
Level Cap: 25
Pokemon available-
18 starters (at this point it's routine)
Pokemon available at time of battle.
SpoilerRoute 1- Slakoth, Caterpie, Scyther, Staravia, Tangela
Legend Way- Shroomish, Foongus, Beedrill, Trubbish
Bloom Outskirts- Scraggy, Croagunk, Pawniard
Event Pokemon/Hidden Pokemon: Aron, Machop, Snivy, Shuppet, Magikarp
Tms available
SpoilerSunny Day
Hail
Work Up
Rock Smash (Buffed to 65 Damage and 100% defense drop)
Taunt
Smack Down
Shadow Ball
Field effect used (Custom)
SpoilerTournament Ring- "In the arena, all forms of combat excel!"
Elemental moves (Ice, Fire, Water, Grass, Ground, Rock, Bug,Flying) get a x1.5% boost: "Mother nature overwhelms the opponent!"
Spiritual moves (Ghost, Psychic) get a x1.5% boost: "The challenger challenges the mental boundaries of this world!"
Scientific or Man harnessed moves (Electric, Steel, Poison) get a x1.5% boost: "The challenger strikes with moves too complex for the average joe!"
Legendary moves (Fairy, Dragon) instantly ohko the user and the foe: "A strikingly powerful blast fueled from the legends of our ancestors!"
Trained/Technique type moves (Normal, Fighting) get a x1.2% boost: "The result of hard training and studying!"
Dark Type moves get a x1.5% boost: "An underhanded trick by our opponent!"
All Priority moves get a x2% boost. "A strike performed at hyperspeed!"
All Normal Type status moves effects are doubled.
Pokemon cannot fall asleep.
Paralysis only lasts 5 turns.
Burn damage is 12% a round, but gives all of the burned opponent's attacks a 30% chance to burn.
Sound based moves get a x1.1% boost. "The attack combined with the roars of the crowd!"
Poison damage is buffed to 20% a round.
After using Work Up, Moves that require charge or recharge to use, now don't. This effect only lasts for one use of a move though. (Ex. Round 1: Work Up. Round 2: Hyper Beam. Round 3: Hyper Beam. Round 4: Recharge.)
Aiden's Team:
SpoilerVigoroth Lv 22 w/ Silk Scarf
Slash
Aerial Ace
Rock Tomb
Shadow Claw
Porygon Lv 22 w/ Eviolite
Ability: Analytic
Recover
Toxic
Psybeam
Tri Attack
Gumshoos Lv 23 w/ Lum Berry
Ability: Stakeout
Leer
Tackle
Bite
Work Up
Trumbeak Lv 23 w/ Metrenome
Ability: Skill Link
Pluck
Fury Attack
Bullet Seed
Rock Blast
Loudred Lv 24 w/ Oran Berry
Echoed Voice
Work Up
Uproar
Shadow Ball
Diggersby Lv 25 w/ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Huge Power
Tackle
Bulldoze
Double Kick
Agility
Opening dialogue:
Spoiler"So..., a lot's happened in the past week. Team Zeta, Cults, and High School Drama. I just want you to know, this is all your fault. By you forcing my hand, a lot of things are going to change. You've set everything in motion, and when it all crumbles in on you, when you're all alone, squealing in pain to the crunching sound of your bones, you only have yourself to look at. You're not a hero. You're ignorant. You're ignorant of everything that happens next. Are you ready to take on the responsibility of what you've caused? Do you truly think you can save the citizens of Wyquil? Well, I don't. I'm a Gym Leader, so I'm pretty good at assessing where you are, in terms of a person, and a trainer. You're not up to speed anywhere. So, I'll crush your resolve here, and send you back to wherever you came from with your tail between your legs. I'll humiliate you in front of everyone! And then you'll know what you're getting into. Pain, sorrow, and anger. You're not ready for any of that, and I'll show that here! Prepare yourself. I don't pull punches!"
Last Pokemon:
Spoiler"You think you can change anything? I'm not done yet!"
Loss:
Spoiler" I-I..., I just don't know what to say. If you think you've done anything positive, you're wrong. In fact, you've only showed me why Team Zeta's goal is worth supporting. If worthless trash like you can just poof into existence and beat someone like me, it only shows how unfair this world is. I will not forget this. Take your damn badge and get out. That'll raise the God forsaken level cap to 35, and make your rotten Pokemon respect you somehow. Damien will give you a Tm and a Pokemon outside. Get out of my sight."
Pokemon awarded: Porygon/Zangoose. (Porygon if you won with more then 3 Pokemon, and Zangoose if you won with 3 or less Pokemon.)
Item awarded: Link Stone and Up-grade if you got Porygon. Flame Orb and Toxic Orb if you got Zangoose.
Tm awarded: Facade and Strength.
Next Gym Type: Ghost
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Format: Double Battle
Team: Delphox, Sableye, Medicham, Claydol, Zoroark, and Mismagius.
Basic movesets for all as of right now.
Theme: Magic
Field effect: Wonderland:
Spoiler"A wonderland of trickery and absurdity!"
All Special Psychic moves roll a 6 sided dice to see if their move gets any stronger. 1: x0.5, 2: x0.7, 3: No buff or debuff, 4: x1.2, 5: x1.5, 6: x2. "You toss the dice of endless mystery and roll a(n) (Insert random number you got)"
All Physical Psychic moves are boosted by x1.2: "The movement challenges the very fabric of reality!"
All Ghost Type moves are boosted by x1.5: "The spirits of the unknown have come to play!"
Ghost Type moves hit Normal and Fighting types super effectively.
All Dark Type moves are boosted by x1.3: "The endless darkness is so exciting!"
All Priority moves get boosted by x1.2 and confuse the opponent: "BOO!"
Pokemon cannot fall asleep
Dance moves get their effects doubled.
Fiery Dance is boosted by x1.2. "What a feisty dance!"
Haze steals the opponent's stat changes.
Mist puts up a reflect and light screen.
Multitype and RKS system give the user two random types every round.
Sound moves get boosted by x1.2.
Double Team's effect is doubled.
If any Beam or Ball moves miss, they will bounce off a mirror and deal double the damage. "Back atcha!"
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Hello again. This will probably be the third to last time I drop dialogue on the forums. I want to get reviews of course. But there's so much more to learn outside of what people say on the internet, positive or negative. Wow. I think that's quotable. Ok. To the dialogue.
Krystal- Ice Type/Thaumaturge's mountain Gym Leader.
Aiden- Team Zeta Agent/Bloom Outskirts Gym Leader
Barada- Team Zeta Puppetmaster
Wax- Team Zeta Sneak
Hazel- Team Zeta Commander
Papa Ge- Team Zeta Autocrat (Fancy way of saying dictator or supreme leader.)
Teams-
SpoilerKrystal- Mamoswine, Alolan-Ninetales, Articuno, Walrein, Mega Glalie, Jynx
Aiden- Silvally, Porygon-Z, Drampa, Mega Pidgeot, Diggersby, Bewear
Barada- Spiritomb, Ferrothorn, Nidoqueen, Magmotar, Fearligatr, Mega Beedrill
Wax- Serperior, Kingler, Ursaring, Nidoking, Electivire, Mega Pinsir
Hazel- Mega Metagross, Tyranitar, Salamence, Volcarona, Greninja, Tangrowth
Papa Ge- Hoopa-Unbound, Hoopa-Unbound, Honchkrow, Malamar, Bisharp, Drapion
Spoiler(Team Zeta HQ. Located under Bloom Central.)
(Two members are seen walking in.)
Barada: -nd that's why, Oranges are named orange.
Wax: See, but that doesn't make sense. Why name oranges, orange? Why not name them yellow? Why aren't apples named red?
Barada: Because when they were named, nobody cared as much as you do, and they just got to eating, rather then focusing on specifics. Aren't you a cannibal anyway, why do you care?
Wax: I'm only a cannibal on Tuesdays! Besides, I still want to know what my victims are eating so I can slurp up their nutrients!
Barada: That might be the most disgusting thing I've heard all year.
Wax: Hey, I don't judge your weird dances you do alone at 12:00.
Barada: You mean my very important rituals essential to our survival? Yeah, please don't judge.
Krystal: Can you guys shut up? I already have enough of a headache, and listening to you two stooges speak makes my entire body ache.
Wax: Am I really that charming?
Barada: Wax, shut up.
Wax: Ok...
(Aiden walks in meeting room as Barada and Wax sit down.)
Aiden: Oh, looks like we have some scholars ready for today's class already!
Krystal: Shut your damn mouth! If it wasn't for you, I wouldn't be here right now!
Barada: Calm yourself, none of us want to be in the same room as you as well.
Krystal: So then why the hell are we here, and what do the citizens of the mountain have to do with it!?
Aiden: You should really learn to take a hint. Calm down. Now.
Krystal: No! You guys dragged me here, after taking a village of innocent people hostage, and beating my boyfriend to near death! Why should I calm down? Why are you calm?! How can you be calm after all the disgusting things yo-.
(Hazel walks in.)
Hazel: That's enough. Anymore from you, and-
(Papa Ge materializes behind Hazel.)
Papa Ge: We'll get to chopping on your scrawny fantasy boyfriend!
Krystal: Fantasy? You lit-
Barada: Seriously, shut up. You're in the presence of two people who can wipe your petty existence off the map in a blink of an eye.
Krystal: ...
Barada: Thank you. And to think, you wanted to talk about headaches. My head is pounding. Please, continue.
Papa Ge: Well at least someone has some sense in this world! It's good to know I have people like you on my side bro. We'll be best friends forever!
Barada: Uhhh, okay?
Wax: Is the meeting over?
Papa Ge: Oh right, that's what we're here for. Nope.
(Devious smile forms on Papa Ge's face.)
Papa Ge: It's just starting to get interesting. Take it away my sweet Hazel!
Hazel: ..., anyways. Let's get down to business. Long story short, we want something from you Krystal.
Krystal: What is that exactly? What makes it worth dragging me down here and holding my people hostage?
Hazel: We want you to tell us what the Thaumaturge's cult is planning.
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Krystal: The what?
Hazel: Don't play dumb with me. We've seen you talking directly to the Cyroking as if it was nothing.
Krystal: I seriously have no idea what you're talking about. I only reside in my village, and rarely go outside. I've never associated with a "Cyroking".
Wax: God, you're clueless.
Krystal: I won't take that from someone who questioned why Oranges were named Oranges! They're literally freakin' orange!
Barada: Pffft. (Holding back laughter.)
(Wax stands up.)
Wax: You'll be sorry you ever said that you insignificant piece of,..., ugh! I can't even think of a comeback!
(Wax pulls out a radio.)
Wax: Bring me my punching bag!
(Meeting room doors instantly open. Everyone is greeted by Team Zeta grunts dragging in a teenage male.)
Krystal: What the,.., Cole!
(Krystal stands up and grabs a pokeball.)
(Cole coughs up blood.)
Cole: What,.., are you doing here? Why did you come? You've fallen right into a trap!
Wax: Speaking of traps, shut yours!
(Wax kicks Cole in the mouth.)
Cole: Augh!
Krystal: NO! I'll kill you! Go Articuno, destroy him! Use Ice Beam!
Papa Ge: Stop.
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Krystal: Articuno?
(Articuno faints.)
Krystal: What the?
Wax: Hehehe. Hahahaha. HahaHAHAHAHA! You can't harm me in front of my master!
(Wax keeps kicking cole in the mouth as he laughs maniacally.)
Hazel: That's enough Wax. Sit down.
Wax: Whatever you say millady!
(Wax sits, as Krystal's mouth is wide open in shock. She's looking at her fallen Articuno and her boyfriend's bloody face.)
Papa Ge: IN ANY CASE. We're not fucking around with you. I hope we've made that clear.
Krystal: I-I, What the hell do you guys want!
Hazel: I just told you. We want to know what the Thaumaturge's cult is planning.
Krystal: UGH! I just said I don't know a damn thing about a Cyroking or Thaumaturd's cult!
Papa Ge: Suuure, Barada, teach that punching bag a lesson.
Barada: Um, ok.
(Barada walks over to Cole and picks him up.)
Barada: Go Ferrothorn!
(Barada drags Cole's face near one of Ferrothorn's spikes.)
Barada: Start talking. I'd rather not destroy this poor dude's face, but if that's what it takes to save the world then so be it.
Krystal: Please stop! I swear on everything I don't know what you're talking about!
Papa Ge: Damn. I feel really bad for that poor boy. Barada?
Barada: Yes sir?
Papa Ge: Turn his face into a shishkebab.
Barada: Your wish is my command.
Cole: No, no no no. UGH! AH! CHILL! CHILL OUT! OH GOD. PLEASE STOP!
(Barada forces Cole's right eye onto a Ferrothorn spike.)
Krystal: Jesus christ, STOP!
Barada: Then you start talking! Do you think I like doing this!
Krystal: I don't know anything about the cult. JUST LET US GO!
Barada: Listen lady, I have a Beedrill in my party, and if you don't get to talking, I'm gonna get a ton of blood stains on my uniform.
Krystal: ..... Fine. If that's what you twisted fuckers want then fine!
Wax: It's about time.
Krystal: Shut up! You want to know what their planning huh! Well here you go! They're going to resurrect the original dragon! Simple as that! Then, they're going to force this shit stain of a planet into a never ending winter! And after that, they'll remake it from the ground up! Happy?!
Papa Ge: Not really. But I'm somewhat satisfied. Is there anything else you'd like to tell us.
Krystal: Oh I have a LOT I'd like to tell you. But you should know they already possess Kyurem and Reshiram. They know you have Zekrom. Which means they're coming to kill your asses! All of you!
Papa Ge: If you honestly think the Cyroking alone is a match for me, then you've got another thing coming. Barada, kill the boy.
Krystal: STOOOP! They're also using a modified DNA splicers to summon him at the top of Thaumaturge's mountain!
Hazel: What's that do for us.
Krystal: If it's just an item they're using, then you could easily steal it and modify it to fuse your two Hoopas! Or whatever you want.
Papa Ge: Holy..., shit YOU'RE A GENIUS.
Krystal: Whatever! Please, let me and Cole go!
Papa Ge: YES! THIS CHANGES EVERYTHING. OH MAH GAWD THIS IS A BREAKTHROUGH. BARADA KILL THE BOY AND GIRL! THIS IS A MIRACLE ARCEUS HAS BLESSED ME!
Krystal: What?
Cole: Please ...
Barada: Sorry bro, but it's looking like a wrap for you.
Krystal: NO! Go, Walrein and Ninetales!
Barada: Tch, Ferrothorn, Magmotar, let's do this!
Wax: Aww, let me join the fun. Go Ursaring!
Hazel: Quit while you're ahead. Go, Tyranitar.
Krystal: I'll take all of you on!
(Uses max revive on Articuno.)
Krystal: (Shoot, she changed the weather.) Come back Ninetales, Go Jynx! Use Reflect!
Wax: Too Slow!
Barada: Ferrothorn, use Gyro Ball on the Ursaring!
Wax: Catch it Ursaring and use Strength to throw it at the girl!
Krystal: Walrein, use Blizzard!
Hazel: Tyranitar, use Stone Edge to change the Ferrothorn's direction!
Krystal: What the, agh!
(Ferrothorn bounces off the Stones and charges straight toward Krystal, successfully chopping her arm off.)
Krystal: Ugh. It hurts! You guys...! Articuno use Hurricane! Walrein, use Blizzard! Jynx use Blizzard!
(As the moves are fired off, an extremely destructive snow storm is created.)
Barada: Ugh! Damn girl!
Aiden: Pidgeot, use hyper beam!
Krystal: AGH!
(Mega Pidgeot's hyper beam pierces through the snowstorm and takes off Krystal's other arm.)
(All of her pokemon stop their attack and go to help her.)
Hazel: Where have you been this entire time.
Aiden: Biding my time. Waiting for an opening.
Wax: Smart! How did you know this would happen.
Aiden: It may not seem like it, but Papa Ge is a genius. He knew exactly how this would go down. And took advantage of Mega Pidgeot's no guard ability.
Wax: Woah, my master is cool.
Hazel: But I'm your master....
Wax: You're meh.
Hazel:....
Krystal: Don't ignore me!
Aiden: You're half dead. Stop while you're ahead. Your Pokemon won't even fight because they're too busy protecting you.
Krystal: Fuck you!
Aiden: I'm not into girls with no arms. You should really pull yourself together.
Barada: Wow, that's cold.
(Krystal falls to her knees.)
Hazel: I should end this. Thank you for the information. Die knowing you helped take part in saving the world.
Aiden: Watch out!
(Hazel's body is cut in half by an Aegislash.)
Hazel: huh. Ugh!
Wax: Hazel! Who did this!
Barada: You little..., I should've killed you when I had the chance! How dare you kill her! Do you know how much she meant to me?
(Cole is barely standing up with a pokeball open. It's the one that let the Aegislash lose.)
Cole: We're leaving. Right now.
Barada: On my dead body you are! I still have pokemon left! Magmotar, use flamethrower!
Cole: Go Genesect! Use Techno Blast
Wax: Ok, how did he get a-
(Huge explosion.)
(Cole picks up Krystal and her pokeballs, making her pokemon return, and runs out of the hole created by the explosion.)
Barada: Get back here! I'm not finished wi-
(Papa Ge grab's Barada's shoulder.)
Papa Ge: Don't worry. You'll have your chance for revenge. Let's just focus on what's important now.
Barada: Bu-but..
Papa Ge: F O C U S.
Barada: ..., Yes master. Grunts! Prepare our materials and prepare to leave, there's no way the people of Bloom Central didn't feel that explosion!
Wax: Also, get Hazel some damn medical attention! She's gonna die!
Aiden: Leave her all ready before we have a gym leader to deal with!
Wax: What the? Barada! Come on! Help me carry Hazel!
Barada: ..., we have to focus on more important things. She's a goner. Grab her pokemon and go.
Wax: What..? You. YOU! YOU BACKSTABBER!
Papa Ge: DIDN'T I SAY F O C US.
Wax: ...., yes master. My bad.
Aiden: Uh, ok. In that case. Let's get going.
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Barada: Yeah.
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Trying out some more dialogue for my game.
Would like to be rated.
Aiden- Gym Leader of Bloom Outskirts
Enema- Gym Leader of Bloom Central/Aiden's Ex
Damien- Aiden's Right Hand Man
Tyler- Aiden's Lackey
Dallas- Aiden's Lackey
Carmen- Aiden's Boyfriend
Seth- Your Rival
Vera- Seth's Sister
Spoiler(Sounds of battling and trash cans being flung can be heard from a nearby alley.)
Seth: Uh, ok. I'm just going to ignore that.
Vera: What if someone is in trouble?
Seth: I literally don't care, they're probably in trouble for good reason.
Vera: What if it's a helpless little girl who bumped into the wrong person?
Seth: Then sue the parents for neglect. How many of your sentences have to end in question marks for you to understand, we don't acknowledge these things. Remember, you're a criminal, so lay low, and mind your own damn business!
Vera: Tch, I'm going back there! If you really want to change, you'll come with me!
Seth: (Mocking Vera) Oh, yeah, I want to change! That will definitely get me out of jail! It's not like I've savagely beaten people before! HAHahaHaAha. -Sigh- (Follows Vera)
(In the Alley. 6 Figures are visible. 2 males appear to be battling 1 girl. Male 1 has a Rampardos, and Male 2 has an Aerodactyl. Girl 1 has a Vivillon.)
Vera: SEE, I TOLD YOU S-
Seth: (Cups Vera's mouth and drags her behind a flung Trash can.) -Whispers- Are you stupid? Do you know who that is?
Vera: -Whispering is muffled through Seth's hand- Well, clearly I don't, considering I nearly threw out my Pokemon.
Seth: That's AIDEN. A GYM LEADER. He's literally the law.
Vera: So what?
Seth: We're criminals. And you were about to assault the people with him with your Pokemon. Do you want 20 years behind bars?
Vera: I think 20 years is an overstatement.
Seth: Ok, well, let's bring up your history in the Asteroid be-
Vera: Understood. 20 years is a perfect sentence for someone like myself.
Seth: Thank you.
(Large gust of wind blows Trash Can covering Seth and Vera away.)
Enema: -Panting heavily- Is that all you guys got?
Dallas: You have one pokemon left. You cannot win.
Tyler: You slow or somethin'? Give up while you're ahead and I'll be gentle.
Enema: Tch, ambushing a girl, and then countering her favorite type? I'm pretty sure being "gentle" is out of the picture.
Dallas: Details, details. Quit the talking. Rampardos, end this. Use Rock slide!
Enema: Actually, the battle is already over.
Tyler: For you maybe.
(A swarm of trash cans suddenly drops on Aerodactyl and Rampardos.)
Dallas: What in the-?
Tyler: Holy shit!
Dallas: What the hell did you do!
Enema: Heh, what did you think that blast of wind was for? I had Vivillon use hurricane to fling the trash cans up, and let you two talk your mouths off until they landed. Pretty smart eh?
Dallas: It would've been, if that wasn't the final trick up your sleeve. I still have 2 Pokemon left. And this time, Steel won't hurt them. Go Arcanine!
Tyler: And I have 3 Pokemon! Go Vivillon!
Enema: (A Vivillon? What are they planning?) Vivillon! Use Hurricane to launch those trash bags at them!
Dallas: Not this time you stuck up bug! Arcanine use Heat Wave!
Tyler: Vivillon, use powder!
Enema: Wait, no! Don-!
(Heat Wave Clashes with the Hurricane, Vivillon uses powder to put explosive substances in the air, turning the clash into Arcanine's favor. As well as the Heat Wave turning the Trash bags and bins on fire, and the powder making them explode, effectively turning them into Grenades.)
(Explosion)
Carmen/Damien: AIDEN WATCH OUT!
Seth: Vera, this is our chance! We gotta GO!
Vera: She could be dead! I have to check if she's alright!
Seth: Listen, whoever she is, I know for a fact she wouldn't want a somewhat innocent person to run into the middle of a deadly battle. So do her a favor, and let's bounce!
Vera: No! I'm going! (Runs into smoke.)
Seth: You self righteous piece of..., ugh! (Runs into smoke as well.)
(Smoke clears)
Tyler: Did we get her?
Dallas: We definitely did.
Vera: Go Lucario! Use Close Combat on those losers!
Tyler: What the? Dallas!
Dallas: I got it. Arcanine, use heat wave and light up the leftover substances on the ground!
Seth: Go Throh! Use Wide Guard to block it!
(Explosion clashes against barrier.)
Tyler: They survived? What the- AUGH!
(Tyler falls after getting punched in the stomach by Lucario.)
Dallas: You ignorant little kids! Where did you even come from! Arcanine, use-!
Seth: Throh, use Storm Throw!
(Throh throws Arcanine into the air.)
Vera: Now, Lucario, Focus Blast it into Oblivion!
(Lucario uses focus blast and knocks out the flying arcanine.)
Dallas: Tch, return Arcanine! I still have a Pokemon left, and I'll be damned if I lose to yo-! Go Staraptor! Use Brave Bird on the girl!
Vera: Lucario, use counter!
(Staraptor brave birds into the counter and gets knocked out, flying into Dallas and knocking them both out.)
Seth: Easy. Now let's go check on the girl and get out of here. The police are in hot pursuit of our asses, and I'm 110% sure they'll check an explosion.
Vera: Miss! Are you ok?
Enema: (Covered under trash bags and ash.) Why did you come here! I'm a Gym Leader, I have it under control!
Vera: Well seeing as you're covered in ash and dirt, I'd say you don't, here, let me help you up.
Seth: VERA. WE HAVE BIGGER PROBLEMS.
Aiden: There's just no way, I see little old Seth here. With Vera too. Oh, this is way too good.
Carmen: TOO GOOD.
Enema: Leave them alone Aiden! It's me you came for right? So focus on me, I still have a Pokemon left!
Aiden: Quit frontin', you know damn well your legs will give out any second now.
Carmen: ANY SECOND.
Enema: And you know damn well that this isn't right!
Aiden: Oh so you want to talk about what's right and wrong now? Who made you the grand arbiter on morality?
Carmen: NOBODY.
Enema: Well, why don't y- okay, can you shut your poor excuse for a girlfriend up? I can't believe I dumped you and you crawled to this chick.
Aiden: Go, Silvally! Now. If you have something else you'd like to say, let's hear it. I'm sick and tired of your games. I'm ending your manipulative tyranny here.
Carmen: RIGHT NOW.
Enema: Big words for someone who doesn't understand anything! You're just a pawn!
Aiden: Pawn I may be, but at the end of the day, I'll be at the top, and you should've been there with me.
Carmen: SHOULD'VE.
Enema: Who cares about being at the top! Have you thought about what will happen to everyone you cared about!
Aiden: Everyone I cared about is either dead, or covered in trash in front of me wailing about what's right and wrong.
Carmen: WAILING.
Enema: Don't you have a heart?
Aiden: You ripped out my heart and threw it down the drain along with our relationship.
Carmen: TORE IT OUT.
Aiden: Ok, Carmen, you can stop now. It's starting to annoy me.
Carmen: Haha, my bad. Now who's this trash bag you're arguing with. Can I drop her in a casket?
Aiden: That will be my pleasure, but we can't do that yet.
Seth: -Whispering- Now would be a good time to leave.
Vera: -Whispering- I'm actually starting to agree with you.
(Seth and Carmen slowly tip toe out until they hit a barrier.)
Carmen: Nice try.
Damien: Where do you think y'all are goin'?
Seth: Literally anywhere else.
Damien: Sorry, see, you've seen a bit to much. So you gotta go.
Vera: Does that mean you- you're gonna kill us?
Damien: Duh
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Seth and Vera: HAHAHAHA, LMAO, LOOK AT THIS TOUGH GUY.
Damien: What the? What's so funny losers?
Seth: (Tearing up from laughter) With all due respect, We've survived much more then you think we have. You won't be killing shit.
Vera: I'm more scared of infection from that trash bag then you!
Damien: Why you little. How about this! Go Salamence!
Seth: Oh.
Vera: Oh.
Seth: Whatever, if it's a battle you want, it's a battle you'll get! Go Greninja!
Vera: What he said! Let's do this Weavile!
Aiden: Go help out Damien, Carmen. I'll handle Enema.
Carmen: She only has 1 pokemon but ok. I'll take on the runts. Go Alakazam!
Aiden: Don't think I haven't noticed you using revives under those trash bags.
Enema: Tch, Doesn't matter. (All I need is to create an opening, and then Aiden is done for!)
Aiden: Your Pokemon are at half health. You don't stand a chance.
Enema: Well, I'm surprisingly resourceful, so let's see!
Damien: I'll crush you, and then I'll take that sweet little girl back home with me!
Seth: If you touch her, on my life, it's a wrap for you! I'll destroy you right here!
Damien: Try me!
Carmen: Guess it's a double battle then!
Vera: Let's smack these guys!
Aiden: You're mine!
Enema: Come at me!
All: I WILL NOT LOSE! '
Aiden's Team: Silvally, Porygon-Z, Mega Pidgeot, Raticate-Alola, Pyroar, Snorlax
Enema's Team: Vivillon, Forretress, Araquanid, Mega Pinsir, Escavelier, Golispod
Damien's Team: Mega Salamence, Haxorus, Hydreigon, Dragalge, Kommo-o, Garchomp
Carmen's Team: Alakazam, Mega Gallade, Malamar, Exeggutor, Gothitelle, Gardevior
Vera's Team: Mega Lucario, Weavile, Roserade, Delphox, Primarina, Flygon
Seth's Team: Throh, Greninja, Mega Charizard, Mamoswine, Tyranitar, Scolipede
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Uhm. I don't really have much of a comment on the content, but I did need to at the very least warn you about one of your characters' names. Unless this is one of those weird parody games (a la Pokémon Clover), but you probably will want to change Enema's name. This is a pretty SFW wikipedia article on what an enema is and why you probably want to change the character's name.
In any case, good luck with the game!
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LMAO. I didn't even notice that. I just thought it sounded cool. Thanks for the luck lol.
Thanks for the review. I hope I can clear up some things.
I intended for Dallas' mood to kinda elevate. As he went from more formal, and using words sparingly, to being ruder and more insulting. Just about everything else is my own mistake lol. I'm new to this whole writing thing. Regardless, thanks a ton.
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Dialog:
Spoiler???1: Are you serious? It smells like garbage down here.
???2: Can we do this later Aiden? You're tiring enough, as reckless as you are, so I'd rather not deal with your bullshit currently.
Aiden: Shut up, if you were smart, you'd realize we could just call them in and take over this place easily!
???2: With a Gym Leader in town? As well as THE Cyroking? We could cause a war! We're already severely under-funded, and we do NOT have the resources to go into a war for more then an hour.
Aiden: That's because we didn't take over this dump earlier. If we did, we'd at least have some sort of resources. But here we are, traveling through the freaking sewers because we have to uphold "secrecy".
???2: At any point before this, I was busy covering you. Making sure anyone didn't connect the dots between us and Zeta. You have no idea how close we were to being exposed, MULTIPLE times, because your dumb ass wants to show off. We uphold secrecy because it's convenient and it's the only thing keeping us from being executed on the spot. Not to mention-
???3: Michael, I'm seriously gonna suggest you shut up before I blow this sewer up.
Michael: Tell that to Aiden. He's the one complaining, yet he's the reason we're here in the first place, making deals with the people we're AGAINST.
Aiden: Why do you guys hate them anyway? What have they ever done to you.
???3: What have they done to us? What haven't they done to us is a waaaay, better question. Those wealthy, greasy slobs have been looking down on us since ancient times. We simply decided it's time to retaliate using the same things they used to seal us away.
Aiden: Ancient times? Seal you away? You know I'm not that smart. Elaborate.
???3: You're in no position to give me orders, child. You're not entitled to anything. The only reason I'm letting you live right now is because the Master wants it so.
Aiden: Whatever, at the end of the day, I'll be at the top if the plan goes correctly.
Michael: Correction, if you don't drag everything through the mud like you usually do.
Aiden: Yeah, well, your comeback might've had some validity to it if you didn't lose to a child and nearly screwed everything up yourself.
Michael: Are you kidding me? That was the leader of Perfection Organization! I'm lucky to still be alive.
Aiden: Tch, I would've crushed him.
Michael: Sure. You have fun getting through a Mewtwo with Genesect armor.
Aiden: The fucks a Genesect?
???3: Quiet. We're arriving soon, and on my fucking hot pockets, if you mess this up for me, it's gonna be a wrap for you two.
Aiden: I didn't know you guys could eat hot pockets.
Michael: I didn't know we could even mention that in this media.
???3: You humans make remarkable food. Anyway, that's besides the point. We're here.
Aiden: It's a giant wall.
Michael: Then don't you think we're gonna open it?
Aiden: Well I don't see any method of doing sooo, open these nuts.
???3: (Gargling sounds and series of disgusting noises.)
Aiden: Uh, are you good? You sound like you're deepthroating a Ferrothorn.
Michael: I don't know what's worse. That noise, or Aiden's simile.
???3: What's worse is what will happen to all 3 of us if we don't shut up now.
(Doors slowly slides open.)
Aiden: Yoooo, that's crazy.
???3: I hope you have our payment.
Michael: Barely, Aiden nearly forgot it was our funds for this, and almost blew it all at the Game Corner.
Aiden: Just one more game and I would've hit the jackpot. I S W E A R.
Michael: Regardless, the payment has been wired to the account you gave us. I trust that this will destroy the seal on Spiritomb correct?
???3: Correct.
Aiden: Oh, I got this one. And the spirits are sucked through that machine, they're forced back together, forcing a singular entity.
???3: Correct.
Michael: If the power is as we projected, we should be able to open the distortion world with this thing.
???3: That and more, using the energy we collected from the brawl at the Bloom Outskirts, we've amplified it's power and inner darkness to the maximum. It can now control any Ghost, Psychic, and Dark Type Pokemon. It, also has free control over the distortion world.
Aiden: Woah, this thing is Anything Goes for sure.
???3: That's because anything does go. If you could somehow, transfer enough properties from the Distortion World to here, the new and improved Spiritomb could essentially play God here. But I have no idea as to how you'd do that.
Michael: Interesting, what are the base stats?
???3: Projected to be: 150/200/140/170/140/95
Michael: We'll have to work on that speed, but for what it is now, it'll work. Thank you.
???3: Be warned. Let it bathe in the energy of the Distortion World before you do anything major with it. That seal will only hold up for so long if exposed to prolonged pressure. Trust me, you do NOT want to let those 108 spirits lose.
Michael: I'm sure we'll be okay.
???3: I don't know what you plan to do. But if you're messing with forces you don't understand, it will come back and destroy you. Remember, the Distortion World is Giratina's realm, and both Spiritomb and Giratina have been punished by Arceus. And take it from experience, do not mess with God or his subordinates.
Aiden: Arceus is a normal type POKEMON. Something I specialize in. No matter how Godly you might be, a good amount of damage and Pokeballs ALWAYS does the trick.
Michael: Don't worry, if this machine works, then we'll be able to produce thousands of beings like this. That will give us an army of unstoppable mega-spirits that no God can overcome.
???3: In that case, I will take my leave and enjoy my time on Earth before you ruin it. Remember, Arceus lets you parade around as if you mean anything, but you are nothing but a small atom in an ingredient for a much bigger meal. You are not in control, and never will be. Goodbye. I never want to see you again.
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Aiden: Well screw you too then.
Michael: Ignore him. If this works as planned, our plan is already in motion. Call in Zeta and the Asteroid belt.
Aiden: Will do. I wonder how many people will die.
Michael: Projected casualties if things go right: 2,000 deaths at most. But if things go wrong, that number can increase from anywhere to 200,000, to 6,800,000,000.
Aiden: Oh.
Michael: That's why it's imperative we stick to it now. Prepare yourself Aiden.
Aiden: I'm more then ready. Fights have already broken out between the Gym Leader and Cyroking. We'll in the clear.
Michael: Good. Let's bring these snobs back down where they belong.
(Machine starts up.) (Aiden leaves.)
Michael: Everything is going smoothly.
(INCOMING RADIO TRANSMISSION.)
Michael: Hmm? Who is this.
???4: SO WHY THE IN THE NAME OF ARCEUS, WASN'T I INFORMED OF AN ELITE 4 MEMBER BEING HERE.
Michael: Arceus, Elite 4? What? Explain.
???4: So i'm just doing my thing right, raiding a town full of innocent people. And then boom, this dude Toxa appears out of nowhere and starts thrashing my men!
Michael: Tch, damn it. He always finds a way to ruin everything!
???4: Aiden and I are engaged in combat with him currently. It's not looking so good, but we can hold him off for whatever you're planning. You have 10 minutes at most.
Michael: In that case, I'll have to use the crystals I gathered.
???4: OH ABOUT THOSE CRYSTALS, ON EVERYTHING I STAND FOR PLEASE DON'T U-
Michael: Hold him off for as long as you can.
???4: YOU'RE SO DUMB, PLEASE DON-, AUGH!
(Transmission cuts off.)
Michael: Whelp, let's do this.
(Sticks Z-crystal of every type in multiple chargers across the machine.)
(Puts a Pokeball with Spiritomb inside the machine.)
(Sends out a Malamar)
(Places Escape rope inside machine.)
(Malamar uses Topsy Turvy on Escape Rope.)
Michael: Ok. Let's do this.
(Presses buttons and machine stirs to life.)
(Z-crystals turn a dark grey in color, indicating all the energy has been sucked up.)
(Energy is forced into Escape rope. Which is now an Anti-Escape rope due to Malamar using Topsy-turvy on it.)
(Seal on Spiritomb is broken with leftover energy.)
(Spirits fly out the seal and go up the machine.)
(Spirits are trapped with Anti-Escape Rope.)
Michael: Ok. (Breathes)
Michael: I call upon every sinister and deadly force known and unknown to man. I call upon the origin of everything terrible. I invoke all that is negative and stops all progress. ALHUL EALAA MUSIADA!
(Room shakes and reality breaks down around Michael.)
(Michael's eyes roll back in head.)
Michael(?): I am the end. I am the vacuum that is known as a black hole that sucks in all hope. I make sure this is nothing after to me. You the one reading this, are pitiful compared to the terrible being that is I. I bring despair, and turn once sensible and humble beings into depraved sociopaths. You worry about the end and try and prevent it, and ignore it, and bask in the light that you have currently. Not only am I the light, I make sure nothing comes after me. With all this in mind, what do you wish?
(Michaels eyes return to normal. Visibly shaken and eyes are now bleeding.)
Michael: Give me command over this infernal beast!
(Eyes roll back in head.)
Michael(?): Your wish is granted. You have survived my possession, and have proved yourself to the celestial devils that prowl around every galaxy. Do what you will. I am gone. Goodbye.
(Eyes return to normal and wounds are healed.)
Michael: (Gasping heavily.) aha. AHAHAHAHA! I DID IT!
(Machine starts fuming steam and shaking as smoke slowly spews out the exit chamber.)
Michael: Come to me, and serve me! Together we will show those pitiful excuses for humans what REAL power means.
(Large entity crawls out exit chamber as machine calms down.)
Michael: HAHA! Spiritomb! My friend! Are you ready to assi-
(Spiritomb telepathically raises Michael off the ground.)
Michael: (Choking and coughing) What, what sorcery is this! Put me down you beast! You serve me!
Spiritomb: I serve nobody except the unending darkness. You have made a grave mistake reviving a supreme divine being such as I and attempting to command me. Die, and never come back. Your spirit will never reach peace.
Michael: What, put me down now!
(Spiritomb telepathically throws Michael down through the ground to the core of the Earth, obviously, killing him.)
Spiritomb: Earth, it's time. Time a real God ruled. Arceus, you're next. But allow me to make an example of these pitiful bags of flesh.
(Disappears in flash of smoke.)
(RADIO TRANSMISSION INCOMING.)
???4: MICHAEL. WTF ARE YOU DOING MAN. I'M GETTING CRUSHED. THIS DUDE TOXA REALLY IS AN E4 MEMBER! OH, NOT TO MEN-, hey, wait, what the hell is that thing. Aiden, AIDEN LOOK OUT! NO!
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???4: MICHAEL, ARE YOU THERE? IS THIS YOUR DOING? HELP US. SOME, SOME CREATURE IS DESTROYING EVERYTHING. TURNING SHIT TO DUST, AND ETC. PLEASE. AIDEN ISN'T WAKING UP!
???4: OH GOD OH GOD, IT'S TURNING PEOPLE INTO BEETLES AND SUMMONING LIGHTNING BOLTS. PLEASE HELP! I'M GONNA DIE, I QUIT! I'M NOT CUT OUT FOR THIS! ARCEUS I'M SORRY. PLEASE!
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???4: I, ..., I think it's done? I can't see it. Oh god, that horrendous image is gonna stick with me forever.
Scratchy, and deep voice heard, presumably Spiritomb: Horrendous you say? Oh I'm far worse then that.
???4: Oh God. NO NO NO, GET AWAY, STO-
(Crunching and ripping sound is heard for a duration of 30 seconds until complete silence.)
Spiritomb: You're next.
(Transmission cuts out.)
(Video Tape ends)
Tell me how you liked it lol.
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Bloom Outskirt Analysis-
Hypeman Aiden-
SpoilerThe Normal Type leader of the Wyquil Region, as well as the leader of the Bloom Path, or otherwise known as the Bloom Outskirts. Egotistical and Outrageous, this leader is very arrogant and displays symptoms of slight sociopathy. He always finds a way to put himself over others, and put others down. It's not completely his fault though. He was raised in the Outskirts, a place where being mighty is admired, and being "regular" is looked down upon. He claims to use the Normal Type to prove he can beat the Egomaniacs with what they hate and the "Regs" (Outskirt slang for regular) at their own game. Although, it's a commonly accepted theory that Aiden uses the Normal type to remind himself that he's just like everyone else. He participates in Single and Double battles with a team of: Herdier, Pidgeotto, Marill, Girafarig, Jigglypuff, and his controversial ace, Drampa. The Ace is controversial due to being a strong dragon, with an ability that gives it +1 right when you do some decent damage. Even though it's slow, it's fast enough to deal with the things that most trainers would have at that point. His team already has coverage, and the normal type combined with the dragon type provides insane coverage. (They are both types known for coverage). And even for Dragon types, it's special attack stat is nothing to laugh at. And the Outskirt brawl, the official tournament in which Aiden gives out his badges, also helps Drampa take advantage of his coverage. For these reasons, the league is considering making Aiden's use of Drampa illegal, but no action has been made yet.
Gate Boss Damien-
SpoilerThe 1st Gate Boss in the Wyquil Region that trainers have to beat in order to register for the league. Although, the "register for the league part" is specific to him. His main function is to test trainers to see if they're ready for Aiden. He specializes in hazards, and uses them, combined with his bulky team to take down Aiden. He claims that: "If they can take me down with offense, then they should be able to match Aiden's hyper offense. Besides, if they can't beat me, Aiden would just humiliate them, so I'm doing everyone a favor." Compared to Aiden, Damien is humble and not as outgoing, but not afraid to take a stand for himself.
His team consists of- Shuckle, Skarmory, Mareanie, and his ace: Kadabra.
His ace Kadabra, is only there to clean up after the hazards have done their damage.