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Posts posted by CodeCass
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On 6/25/2018 at 8:10 AM, KmK said:
I liked it. You wrote an event that happens in reborn without copying every sentence straight from the game. That way, while knowing roughly what will happen, it's still different enough to have some suspense. I also think the pace of the story was good, by skipping from finding the police officer to the station and from the station to the battle, you don't slow the story down so that it doesn't become boring.
I was a little confused at the first paragraph, not knowing what the story was about. However, things became clearer as I read on. It does kinda feel like the protaganist should have a bigger reaction to finding the dead police officer. After all, he found a dead person. That should have some kind of reaction besides "Damn". Unless this has to do with the character's personality, which this story was to short for to get a feel for.
I do have a question though: are you going to write an entire story? Or is this going to be a one-shot? It does say chapter one... If you're going to write the entire game as a story, I wouldn't start with this as chapter one. Also, if you're going to write the entire story, I would put a summary at the beginnning. Just so people know what to expect.
I also think growlithe's reaction/behavior was a good idea. It makes sense for the pokemon to react to her trainers dead.
Hope this response makes sense, English is not my native language. Overall, I did like the story and I'd be interested in reading more.
So I'm 5 months late on this reply! Just wanted to say I really appreciate the response and critique and that I'll put them to good use. Hoping to get the creative juices flowing again soon in order to write some more entries.
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Today I learned that Mark Hamill did the voice for Goro Majima (my favorite character in the series) for the English dub of the original PS2 Yakuza game.
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9 hours ago, Xanthous said:
I don't build/paint any models myself, but I've always been interested in seeing other people's work! Grats on doing your painting by hand. I think your colors turned out great.
I know a bit more about Digimon than Gundam, so I'm really excited to see Omegamon here! VERY nice choice of color for the Metal Garurumon arm and the silver on War Greymon's horns. The "sword at camera" angle is also really cool.
Thanks so very much! I really appreciate the support! Omegamon was my first real try at painting. I painted some of the gold details on the Shining Gundam pictured, but Omegamon's arms were considerably more in depth. Thrilled you like it!
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I AM HERE!
Noobly! Your time is nigh!
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Sorry Celeby, I'm not Candy!
But maybe Corso can hear our call!
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Thought it would be fun to make a thread where gunpla builders could show off their work!
Also go ahead to dont heaitate to show off your Zoids and other mecha as well!
Feel free to post your completed, customized, or works in progress!
Gunpla is Freedom!
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For starters, here’s my recently completed MG 1/100 Shining Gundam! This was my first attempt at hand painting! Love how the gold turned out.
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Super interested! I've never been apart of anything like this before, but color me intrigued!
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Everything is alright now, because I am here!
Q-Jei, your people need you!
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Pretty obsessed with this one at the moment! Beyond excited for the game and love this song in the trailer.
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I heard the call and was trying to get here, but ran out of gas!
Q-Jei I'm sorry! Q-Jei come back!
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Not quite!
It's up to you Celeby!
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Call for CodeCass, get Noobly. Call for Noobly, get CodeCass!
Come forth, SilverHelio!
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I am thou...thou art......wait a minute. Jumped the gun...
Regardless! I too call forth Q-Jei!
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Not quite.
I'll now call Corso to the field!
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It's going to have to be Zero1Six again! Just wait...you'll see. Give it an hour, maybe two... but keep a weather eye on the horizon and you'll see.
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I have appeared once more!
It's about time for some SgtNoobly, yeah?
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Currently on yet another Mindless Self Indulgence kick. Digging the songs "Casio", "F**k Machine", and "Ala Mode" in particular.
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Sorry friend!
Here comes Q-Jei! You watch, it'll happen!
You're next line is...."nani!?!"
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Ok, I'll give this a go!
General Info:
Known as: Cody
Age: 29 years old
Gender: Male
Birthday: January, 1989
Location: Southern Illinois
Height: 5' 8"
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Hazel
Lives with: My Wife
Pets: One spoiled cat
Relationship status: Married
Favourite Food: Broccoli and Cheese Casserole
Favourite Drink: Diet Green Tea / Tom Collins
Favourite Color: Green
Favourite kind of Music: Heavily depends on my current mood!
Favourite Band: No favorite in particular. Depends on the day!
Favourite Album: n/a
Favourite Song: "Africa" by Toto....before it was a meme....
Favourite Game: it'll be forever and always Final Fantasy X
Favourite Genre of Game: JRPG's
Favourite Hobbies: Tabletop RPGs, Monster Taming, Gaming, Fishing, Baseball, Hiking
Favourite Movies: Kill Bill 1 & 2, Final Fantasy Advent Children, Eternal Sunshine of a Spotless Mind, Scott Pilgrim vs the World, Casablanca.
Favourite Shows: The Office, FLCL, DBZ/S, Many more anime titles, Parks and Rec, Wilfred.Community questions:
So, who are you?: Just a fellow Pokémon fan. Started playing the games when I was 10 and have enjoyed it ever since. I live in a rural area and enjoy nature. I work at an ice cream factory and have been married since 2013 to the woman of my dreams. I'm really just a very simple guy who digs games of all kinds, movies, anime, and doing anything fun. I'm just as happy playing or watching baseball, golf, or fishing as I am with a controller in my hands!Anything you're responsible for? Not really. I used to do some streaming and some Youtubing, and I'd like to again some day. I guess you can say I'm responsible for my channels. Otherwise, really nothing yet.
What can I talk to you about? Any and everything. I'm a fairly open book and am a good listener. Always willing to learn and to make new friends! I'm not the best at dealing with issues myself, but hey, if I can help I'll give it a shot!
Closing statements? Just that I'm glad to be back on the Reborn forums and to be able to chat with all you kind folks!
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Oh no! I was late! Sorry Archeric!
Now, it's my move! I summon Filthy Casual, in attack mode and play one card face down!
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Could really use some help with Shade. He's always my wall. Any help is appreciated!
Here's the current team:
Nidoqueen (35) - Poison Point
- Toxic Spikes
- Bite
- Rock Smash
- Double Kick
Toxicroak (37) - Poison Touch
- Sucker Punch
- Mud Bomb
- Venoshock
- Drain Punch
Mightyena (37) - Moxie
- Bite
- Roar
- Swagger
- Assurance
Chesnaught (38) - Bulletproof
- Seed Bomb
- Rock Smash
- Spikey Shield
- Bite
Zebstrika (35) - Motor Drive
- Spark
- Thunder Wave
- Flame Charge
- Stomp
Persian (39) - Technician (Quick Claw)
- Fake Out
- Bite
- Power Gem
- Swift
Some notable Pokémon in my PC are:
Magnemite, Yamask, Alolan Sandshrew, Mothim, Meowstic (Female), Staryu, Growlithe, Lilipup, Unfezant (male), Psyduck and Kricketune.
Willing to make whatever changes necessary to take this Ghosty Guy down!
Thanks so much for any and all help folks!

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