Yami no Tenshi

Wow. I never really thought of writing for others like that. I will definetly keep your suggestions in mind. I will write the story that I want to write.

So, does Episode 2 contain Episode 1? Or are they seperate?

So is this a add on to Rejuvenation or Reborn? Either way it looks good, so I'm going to play it. I hope that the story is good.

I have all of them up to Explorers of Sky. I didn't play Sky that much, so I never really got to see any differences between Sky and the other two Explorers.

Pokémon Colosseum Final Battle Music Extended

I see. Thank you for the advice.

Are the newer Mystery Dungeon games any good?

I guess Im not really looking at this advice as "faults" but as constructive critism. I want to write something that will be popluar, so knowing what people want is a key in how my story will play out. Another thing that I have to think about is whether or not to describe the pokemon. Im sure that the majority of poeple who would read my fanfic would know what pokemon Im talking about, but still.

This is awesome!

The angle I was going to go with in the royalty plot was that his father had faked his death(unbeknownst to the main character) and his mother died I=giving birth to him, leaving his retired champion Grandfather to raise him. The grandfather would also introduce him to the rest of the clan. The protagonist would be an underdog for the first arc, which would be a race against 18 other trainers for the title of Champion in the Unova region, and King/Queen of their clan. However, one problem I couldn't really get around was how to present a clan, but have inbreeding not be a problem. EDIT: When

Okay. So the royalty thing is a trap. So should I then focus on unique expirences that define the character?

I would have my character eventually get what he wants, but it would be through a lot of problems, and even more work. Like I said in my above post, only telepathic pokemon like Mewtwo and Jirachi would have Pokespeak. Even in the instances where Pokespeak would occur, it would be short and sweet for pokemon like Jirachi and Shaymin, but long a dramatic for an intelligent pokemon like Mewtwo. To be honest, I can't think of too many other pokemon outside of the previously mentioned pokemon that have telepathy. Lugia, Hoopa, and Diancie. I think that's all. Maybe Victini.

I wanted to do a story involving a fight through all of the regions. My character would be a member of a clan that used to be royalty in the early Unova region. Over time, the clan went underground(literally) and let the citizens of Unova do as they please. The clan has two characters that are cannon and I'm developing a story around their unique pokemon and skills. I was not planning on using poketalk, unless the pokemon has been stated to have telepathy in canon, such as Jirachi and Mewtwo. The problem I'm facing is how to have one character with the same team go through and beat all of the

Ghost has a lot of my favorite Pokémon. Also Dragon.

The first shiny I owned was a shiny Poochyena from a friend. The first shiny I got myself was a shiny hatched Litwik in Pokémon Black.