ProjectIceman Posted October 17, 2019 Share Posted October 17, 2019 Hey everyone! It's been a while since I posted...pretty much anything on this site. With the upcoming last(?) version of Pokemon Reborn coming up, I decided to write a story on FanFiction about it. Pretty much a "What if a younger version of my persona was in the world of Pokemon Reborn" story. If you are interested, give it a read. As I am a relatively new story writer (majority of my previous experience was when I was in college in English Comp/Lit classes), I would like to see what people think of it. Criticism is accepted...just dont break my heart lol XD https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13408311/1/Pokemon-Project-Reborn 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProjectIceman Posted October 30, 2019 Author Share Posted October 30, 2019 We meet again! Just wanted to let you know Chapter 2 is out right now. Aka Dialogue: The Movie XD And will most likely be only part 1, because we know how Reborn is with dialogue lmao! XD Check it out if you're interested and let me know if you have any suggestions or recommendations on my writing style. Also, I will be putting down a poll to see which starter I should choose in this story later. EDIT: Forgot to put in the URL XD https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13408311/2/Pokemon-Project-Reborn 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Awesome_One Posted October 30, 2019 Share Posted October 30, 2019 Not bad. I liked this 1 a lot. Although, you seem to have a habit of speaking in both the past and present tense when you're writing this. I can't blame you though. I used to do that a lot too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProjectIceman Posted October 30, 2019 Author Share Posted October 30, 2019 2 minutes ago, J-Awesome_One said: Not bad. I liked this 1 a lot. Although, you seem to have a habit of speaking in both the past and present tense when you're writing this. I can't blame you though. I used to do that a lot too. Darn. I knew there was something I was missing when I was proofreading it lol. I'll keep that in mind for next chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Awesome_One Posted October 30, 2019 Share Posted October 30, 2019 11 minutes ago, ProjectIceman said: Darn. I knew there was something I was missing when I was proofreading it lol. I'll keep that in mind for next chapter lol. Like I’ve said, I’ve done it before too. It’s all good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ProjectIceman Posted November 7, 2019 Author Share Posted November 7, 2019 Hey everyone! So I am essentially doing a "Choose My Starter" for those that are interested in the story. Here is the link for where the voting poll is. Its located at the top of the profile. https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9358293/ProjectIceman# Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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