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Pokémon Reborn: the novelization

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Alright, around a week ago, I have posted here about how I wanted to make a Reborn fic, and I have decided to push it a bit further. Up until now, I have completed 6 chapters and I'm on the way to complete the seventh, although I will only publish the chapters weekly or bi-weekly. So, here it is, my very first fic: 

 

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13328342/1/Pokémon-Reborn-the-novelisation

 

Just like before, since this is my first publicly published story, I would love it if you could give me some feedback about how my writing has made your day, or how it sucks, or how I could make it better. If a member of the staff sees this, I would very much appreciate your opinion on my handling of the wonderful world and characters that you have created.

 

If you end up reading this post, then I wish you a good day.

 

Edit: If you want to get updates regarding the advancement of the story, then you can follow this thread, I'll post updates when I post chapters.

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Update: 8 chapters are now public!

 

They mainly focus aroud Vero, but the other MCs are going to have their turn in the timelight too!

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Quick update

Pokémon Reborn: the novelisation, chapter 9 has aired. Some focus off of Vero for the time being.

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47 minutes ago, Shiny_umbreonDestiny said:

He dude this is just a little nitpick on the title but Novelization has a Z not an S.

I have just checked, both with 's' and 'z' are acceptable, but the z is more often used. I will change it, thanks for bringing it to my attention!

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Chapter 10 is now out!

Alice and Ari: The Jasper Ward

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Update: Chapter 11 is out!

Vero: First trial, where the young trainer has to fight his first gym battle.

 

Up next, the introduction of Decibel.

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Alright, I didn't think I would make it this quickly, but the 12th chapter is out. Decibel: The cavalry is here!

 

Seriously, I think Decibel has been my favorite character to write as of now. What do you think?

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Alright, this one took some more time, but chapter 13 is out.

From now on, I will slow down a little bit, so I do not stress myself out for litterrally nothing.

Anyway, to those who will see this, have a good read!

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I really enjoy this fic! Decibel is the best.

How did you decide on what genders to make Ari and Decibel, given that they're the non-binary options?

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38 minutes ago, Cadmium48 said:

I really enjoy this fic! Decibel is the best.

How did you decide on what genders to make Ari and Decibel, given that they're the non-binary options?

That, my friend, is an excellent question!

 

For Decibel, I will keep referring to them with non-gendered pronouns. Part of their character is the mystery they have around them, and keeping their gender a secret will add to that.

 

As for Ari, I made something a bit different. I do not intend on directly stating it, but I have let some hints in the story that she represents a different branch of the LGBTQ+ than Decibel. I felt that it would be better to make the two different in this regard.

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Update, Chapter 14 is out!

Vero and Lucia: The slums (part 2)

 

So, I originally intended to post it yesterday, but I've somehow become sick in the middle of the summer. Because of this, I am also unsure that the second half of the chapter actually has the same quality as the first. If you remark a drop, please let me know.

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Update: Chapter 16 is out!

 

Vero and Lucia: The slums (part 3)

 

I know I've said it before, but there may be more time between updates in the future, but never more than a week.

And also, like before, don't hesitate to give feedback! Constructive criticism and general appreciation are both good to recieve and help me in honing my writing skills.

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