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About Gabriel1

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  • Birthday 07/09/2000

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    Quebec, Canada
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    For now, simply living the life I have at its fullest, while trying to not despair about the crappy world I live in - thank you internet for providing some sort of escape.

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  1. Update: Chapter 1 has been rewritten! Honestly, I thought that the first chapter had some awkward dialogue and description, so I replaced it. Hope it is better.
  2. Damn, I hadn't noticed the last post's date. Sorry about that. Besides, thank you for the reply. I'm going to follow this up in PM, like you suggested.
  3. Tell me about how silence kills self-esteem. Seriously, I haven't had anyone tell me any constructive thing about my story since weeks, when I posted the first chapters, despite my fic having a decent flow of visitors and views. Urgh, and now I'm asking a few people for a bit of opinion sharing and I feel like an insecure mess of an attention whore. Do you have any advice on how to personnally deal with this as an author?
  4. Alright, what about these ones: Dwayne "The Rock" Johnson as Bravestone in Jumanji: Welcome to the Jungle Captain Underpants
  5. Update: Chapter 18 is out! Lucia: The Coral Ward If you're reading this, or the new chapters while you're at it, and you have any kind of constructive feedback to give, then please tell me. It's been weeks without someone telling me anything and I am beginning to worry that my quality of writing is dropping.
  6. Update: Chapter 17 is now out! Alice and Decibel: Striking Back Stuff continues to go down at Jasper, now that the trainers are trying to find what is causing these plants to attack everyone who played the game would know, but whatever. I have tried to include some further characterisation for both main characters here, I hope it feels natural. Once again, feedback is extremely scarce, so any you can give would be welcome.
  7. Update: Chapter 16 is out! Vero and Lucia: The slums (part 3) I know I've said it before, but there may be more time between updates in the future, but never more than a week. And also, like before, don't hesitate to give feedback! Constructive criticism and general appreciation are both good to recieve and help me in honing my writing skills.
  8. Update: Chapter 15 is out! Shit hits the fan at the Jasper Ward.
  9. Update, Chapter 14 is out! Vero and Lucia: The slums (part 2) So, I originally intended to post it yesterday, but I've somehow become sick in the middle of the summer. Because of this, I am also unsure that the second half of the chapter actually has the same quality as the first. If you remark a drop, please let me know.
  10. Basically, we would be a more powerful version of Undertale's protag? Also, I'm pretty sure someone must have said it already, but I have never seen such a cute Drapion before!
  11. I must say, this was a very interesting theory. That the plot armor would actually have an explication is intriguing to me. There was a sidequest, however, that I recall. It ended with obtaining a crystal ball and having an old fortune teller tell us the story of an alternate Reborn, seemingly without the Protagonist. In it, Fern seemed to take our place, and this reality apparently ended in its total destruction. Where would that fit? Finally, small nitpick; there is an abandonned PULSE machine under the wasteland, in the same room as a shiny, speaking Garbador. It is heavily implied that this Pokémon is the origin of all the waste.
  12. That, my friend, is an excellent question! For Decibel, I will keep referring to them with non-gendered pronouns. Part of their character is the mystery they have around them, and keeping their gender a secret will add to that. As for Ari, I made something a bit different. I do not intend on directly stating it, but I have let some hints in the story that she represents a different branch of the LGBTQ+ than Decibel. I felt that it would be better to make the two different in this regard.
  13. Alright, this one took some more time, but chapter 13 is out. From now on, I will slow down a little bit, so I do not stress myself out for litterrally nothing. Anyway, to those who will see this, have a good read!
  14. Alright, I didn't think I would make it this quickly, but the 12th chapter is out. Decibel: The cavalry is here! Seriously, I think Decibel has been my favorite character to write as of now. What do you think?
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