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Code: PIRULUK posted a topic in Creative WorksSo... if any of you are in the Fate/Reborn RP or are following it, you'll know that I'm playing a Servant named Lily Voirgaire, who seems to not come from any previous RP on this site. ...Well, for the uninitiated, the truth is that Lily was originally a Gardevoir that I created for Murdoc's old RP that stopped about a year ago. But when Murdoc mentioned the concept for Fate/Reborn to me, I felt an inexplicable urge to revive her character. Lily's character concept was "the female Ralts that wanted to be a Gallade". She was a Ralts who adored the idea of close combat and wanted to become a cool Gallade like her dad, but was restricted by the restraints of her evolution line. As a result, she ended up growing into a Gardevoir that specialised in close quarters combat, by wrapping her limbs in psychic energy and using them to throw punches and kicks. Now, Murdoc told me that he didn't want Pokemon characters in his Fate RP, so, with his permission, I revised Lily to become a human. To keep with the concept of "wanting to fight but being unable to because of natural circumstances", I decided to make her limbless, instead relying on prosthetics which I will not deny were inspired by Olivie Sagebrecht from Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha ViVid. Now, if you read through that rant, hooray! You care! And I therefore love you. If not, then you aren't reading this line anyway, so I have nothing to say to you. Well. I was just going about my normal life, when suddenly a story idea struck me. And I realised I could easily fit Lily into it as the protagonist, to finally give her a proper backstory. And that's what I did. So that brings us to my newest project, Lily Ex Machina. Synopsis Link You can read the story here: http://royalroadl.com/fiction/4141 I appreciate any and all feedback, especially constructive criticism. Note that the writing is heavily influenced by the style of Japanese web novels such as Tate no Yuusha no Nariagari and Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou, and as such the differences from traditional Western writing styles may be slightly jarring.